1) The night Tobias first kissed Eileen, he was so drunk he could barely see. He could feel, however, and what he felt was an amazing tingling in their joined lips. She wrote her name and a rendezvous for the next morning in eyeliner on his arm so he wouldn’t forget.
2) He was rather disappointed when he walked into the café and an ugly girl
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Thanks x
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Great job!
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11) Sort of like the Ugly Duckling in reverse. (Complete with beak).
Thanks for reading, glad you like x
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I've done Eileen's POV in a couple of longer fics now ("On the Brink" and its sequel which is in progress, working title "Over the Edge", as well as the angsty little one about Myrtle's death, "Moaning"), so I thought it was high time I let Tobias answer back.
And the short answer to why she left - because most fics mentioning Snape's childhood have his father leaving instead. I love to go against the grain!
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2006 has been a bad year for a lot of my friends actually. I hope the fact that it's nearly over is a good thing for you.
Do use the private email if you need a whinge xxx
PS For a total belly laugh bit of escapism have a look at Jenowago's (see above) 20 random facts about the Basilisk, she's clearly a genius! http://jenowago.livejournal.com/48775.html#cutid1
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So good. This was fantastic, though different of my usual portrayal of Tobias! I loved it, how it hit home so emotionally, how clearly it resounded in my own head and heart. I am honoured you added me! Well done!
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Glad you like my thoughts on Tobias, I get rather bored of him being portrayed a sadistic brute. Severus is so much more interesting if he turned bad for less cut-and-dried reasons.
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