Comfortably Numb music!fic

[snape_fan_no_1]

Comfortably Numb - Pink Floyd

Hello, is there anybody in there?

Just nod if you can hear me; is there anyone home?

Come on now, I hear you’re feeling down;

I can ease your pain get on your feet again.

Relax, I need some information first;

Just the basic facts, can you show me where is hurts?

There is no pain, you are receding;

A distant ship’s smoke on

Comments

[brighty18]

Beautiful! You capture the pain (and love) and awkwardness well. And the attention to details (stubble, the hum of the air-conditioner, white knuckles, etc.) added incredibly to the atmosphere of sorrow and confusion.

Reaching out one hand, Sirius stroked his fingertips down Remus’ cheek, the edge of his thumb just grazing the corner of his mouth and suddenly they were kissing, fiercely, desperately, like they had never done before, not even at the height of the war when they were convinced each day could be their last together, their last at all.

Great resolution, too!

[snape_fan_no_1]

thank-you so much, I loved writing this piece as well :D