[FIC] Lily's Eyes -- Snape/Lily (PG-13)

[thescarletwoman]

Title: Lily's Eyes
Author: thescarletwoman
Type: Fiction
Word Count: 3200
Pairings: Snape/Lily
Warnings: None.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: No matter where Severus goes, he always is haunted by Lily's eyes.
Disclaimer: Lyrics taken from "Lily's Eyes" from the Broadway musical The Secret Garden. Some lines of dialogue taken from Harry Potter and the Philosopher's/

Comments

[thescarletwoman]

Thanks for catching it. It was there, just missing the little / *g*

And yes, my Snape is quite the angsty bastard. Oh how I love him.

[bewarethesmirk]

Jesus Christ. This is absolutely AMAZAING. I feel the need to squee in gibberish and skfdkfdkfkdfkdff, but I'll try to form some coherent thoughts.

Snape's voice here is so spot-on that it makes me scream in excitement. It's among the best I've ever read. I can just see Snape mulling over all these scenes in his brain of what Lily's life must be like...and the kiss. You've just outdone yourself with the detail and the characterization.

I love that you took the opening speech and put Snape's thoughts behind it now that we know where his mind might have been at the time. Again: perfection.

This is so much better than any kind of orgasm.

*goes to rec*

[thescarletwoman]

♥

Thank you, hon. That's everything I was going for in the fic and I'm so glad it came through.

[saiariddle]

This is very good. Hard to do the mushy/angsty stuff without going out of snape's character. Very nice.

[thescarletwoman]

Thanks very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

[pimpinellae]

Perfect. Snape is spot-on - totally obsessed with Lily until his last breath.

[thescarletwoman]

Yes, he was, wasn't he? Thanks for reading!

[elphaba_of_oz]

OOOO! OOOO! OOOO! OOOO!

Thank you for everything! Thank you for making James a bastard. Thank you for making Lily love Snape! Thank you for just everything!!!

[thescarletwoman]

Whether or not James is a bastard is up for debate. ;^) At least Snape thinks he's a bastard. *g*