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All Is Well
Jun 21, 2010 19:41
Title: All Is Well
Author:
scarysnapey
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: #339 Ninteen Years Later
*cough cough* The last line is a shameless homage to the epilouge that I despised. *cough*
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kellychambliss
June 21 2010, 23:46:20 UTC
Very nice -- so much more satifying than the canon verison. My favorite line: which smells of ink and dust and silence. Love the detail about the clock, too.
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scarysnapey
June 21 2010, 23:59:18 UTC
Thank you :)
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magalud
June 21 2010, 23:50:14 UTC
Oh, what a lovely image. The clock with no hands because Severus has all the time in the world is one of the best lines ever!
That's pure poetry, not prose, dear.
All is well, indeed.
*blows raspberry at the epilogue*
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scarysnapey
June 21 2010, 23:59:07 UTC
Thank you :)
That is very kind of you to say.
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reg_flint
June 21 2010, 23:58:39 UTC
Love the potions ingredients balancing the the prose.
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scarysnapey
June 21 2010, 23:59:29 UTC
Thanks :)
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reg_flint
June 22 2010, 00:00:40 UTC
On top of that it was effing great!
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amorettea
June 22 2010, 03:28:55 UTC
Just plain beautiful! What everyone said about the clock and the phrasing and wow, I am speechless before your brilliance.
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scarysnapey
June 22 2010, 20:51:10 UTC
thank you :)
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alisanne
June 22 2010, 03:44:18 UTC
Gorgeous imagery! And I agree, this is definitely poetry. :)
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scarysnapey
June 22 2010, 20:51:19 UTC
Thanks so much :)
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That's pure poetry, not prose, dear.
All is well, indeed.
*blows raspberry at the epilogue*
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That is very kind of you to say.
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