All Is Well

Jun 21, 2010 19:41

Title: All Is Well
Author: scarysnapey
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: #339 Ninteen Years Later

*cough cough* The last line is a shameless homage to the epilouge that I despised. *cough*

All Is Well )

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kellychambliss June 21 2010, 23:46:20 UTC
Very nice -- so much more satifying than the canon verison. My favorite line: which smells of ink and dust and silence. Love the detail about the clock, too.

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scarysnapey June 21 2010, 23:59:18 UTC
Thank you :)

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magalud June 21 2010, 23:50:14 UTC
Oh, what a lovely image. The clock with no hands because Severus has all the time in the world is one of the best lines ever!

That's pure poetry, not prose, dear.

All is well, indeed.

*blows raspberry at the epilogue*

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scarysnapey June 21 2010, 23:59:07 UTC
Thank you :)

That is very kind of you to say.

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reg_flint June 21 2010, 23:58:39 UTC
Love the potions ingredients balancing the the prose.

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scarysnapey June 21 2010, 23:59:29 UTC
Thanks :)

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reg_flint June 22 2010, 00:00:40 UTC
On top of that it was effing great!

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amorettea June 22 2010, 03:28:55 UTC
Just plain beautiful! What everyone said about the clock and the phrasing and wow, I am speechless before your brilliance.

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scarysnapey June 22 2010, 20:51:10 UTC
thank you :)

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alisanne June 22 2010, 03:44:18 UTC
Gorgeous imagery! And I agree, this is definitely poetry. :)

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scarysnapey June 22 2010, 20:51:19 UTC
Thanks so much :)

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