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Valentine Comment Fest Begins Now!

Feb 08, 2016 09:00

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torino10154 February 8 2016, 14:19:02 UTC

Severus gives Harry a heart for Valentine's day. Harry wonders exactly where he got it. Or, more accurately, from whom.

Snapeheart 1/3 torino10154 February 11 2016, 09:27:38 UTC

Arg! I missed the first couple of lines from my previous ( ... )

Snapeheart 2/3 torino10154 February 11 2016, 09:30:18 UTC

Hermione came through the floo in a rush, speaking before she was fully through ( ... )

Snapeheart 3/3 torino10154 February 11 2016, 09:32:39 UTC

When Harry put his hands around the jar, he was surprised it was warm. He gazed distractedly at it, trying to untangle what Hermione had said. She must mean that Snape and he, that he had a chance, that Snape had meant something by this - whatever it was ( ... )

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 torino10154 February 11 2016, 11:26:34 UTC

Aw!!! That's so incredibly sweet. Well, for a story about a heart in a jar LOL but yes, just lovely. I can absolutely see Severus, hmm, testing Harry this way. I love the way the heart reacted to Harry's touch and thoughts. Really clever. Great job!

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 amanitamuscar1a February 13 2016, 19:14:55 UTC

I was worried this was taking your prompt too literally, and not what you wanted? So glad it worked for you! I didn't realise we were doing open postings either( or just forgot to log in).

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 torino10154 February 13 2016, 19:23:07 UTC

Oh, it's fantastic! I mean I left the prompt figuring someone would write something creepy. LOL But that you made it so sweet and symbolic was even better!

I'm sorry if there was confusion about it being anonymous. We are allowing anon fills but that's mostly so people from IJ and/or DW could participate if they didn't have an account here. I'll make sure your name gets on the wrap-up and master list when we're done.

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 agneskamilla February 11 2016, 14:32:34 UTC

Wow, what an ingenious idea! And everybody's reactions were perfect. Thank you for the great read!

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 amanitamuscar1a February 13 2016, 19:15:33 UTC

Thanks; I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 greenling40 February 11 2016, 14:55:31 UTC

I thoroughly enjoyed all three parts of this (and would have loved to read more). Harry's devotion to caring for Severus' heart, Ron and Hermione's reactions (which made me laugh out loud), and Severus' tentative anticipation upon his return. Just lovely.

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 amanitamuscar1a February 13 2016, 19:16:29 UTC

heh - writing the Hermione/Ron was such fun! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Re: Snapeheart 3/3 katmarajade February 11 2016, 15:21:38 UTC

D'awww! torino10154 mentioned this and I was intrigued. So glad I popped by to read this. As she said, it is a little bit creepy but so very sweet! The last line was D'awww-out-loud-worthy. And I loved Ron and Hermione's reactions. I loved the line about Snape's little twitchy suppressed smile. And I love how the heart was pretty much a not-super-stealthy spy trap, and Harry was totally cool with that. Yup, they'll work quite nicely, won't they?! Thanks for a big smile this morning, MA!

RE: Re: Snapeheart 3/3 amanitamuscar1a February 13 2016, 19:17:31 UTC

You're welcome for the smile; thanks for commenting! Such a fun prompt to write.

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 majmunka February 11 2016, 15:47:31 UTC

how can something creepy be so damn cute! I had to blink really hard. Brilliant prompt and brilliant execution. Perfect Snarry Valentine <3

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 amanitamuscar1a February 13 2016, 19:18:28 UTC

not so much creepy as Snapey, methinks! Glad you enjoyed it.

RE: Snapeheart 3/3 majmunka February 14 2016, 15:53:01 UTC

Would you please give me permission to translate this gem into Hungarian?
I have a community for translated drabbles I particularly love and I'm sure all the reader would love this too.
*hopeful*

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