fic: where thoughts can bloom (freddie/jj/cook)

[snakevsladder]

so i was just clicking around the skins anonymous kink meme, trying to distract myself from my hangover and the essays i should be writing, like you do, but then one of the prompts caught my attention! and i fail at keeping stuff comment-length just about as much as i fail at anon, so:

where thoughts can bloom
freddie/jj/cook
R
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[onneonlights]

thanks for reading! :)

[x_smartie]

A++++++++++++++++++++++
Fucking hell, yes

[onneonlights]

thank you! :D

[likecharity]

OH MY FUCKING GOD, AMAZING.

This is so perfect. Not only is it mindblowingly hot, but everybody's so in character--Cook's so like, nonchalantly telling them what to do and Freddie and JJ are a little freaked out but going along with it anyway, and JJ's so adorable and innocent EVEN WHEN IT'S ALL GOING ON, and Freddie's whole thing where he's trying not to enjoy it is SO HIM.

Cook's lines are seriously just spot-on. I could hear his voice in my head (I could hear all three of them, actually, but him especially!) You'd think the 'babe' thing would sound cheesy or out of place but it works, guh, and Freddie's indignance at it just makes it even better. XD

I'm gonna stop rambling now, but seriously, nnnnnggghhhh awesome. ♥

[onneonlights]

OH MAN, I HAVE SUCH A GUILTY THING FOR BOYS CALLING EACH OTHER BABE IT IS NOT EVEN FUNNY ANYMORE. i'm glad it's not too cheesy or out of place! thank you very much :D

i am charmed by how adorable jj is on the show! it kind of makes me want to read all about him getting corrupted in many different ways, idek.

[likecharity]

IT JUST WORKS SO WELL FOR COOK. COOK AND FREDDIE. I DON'T KNOW HOW BUT IT DOES, SO A+ ON THAT ONE.

JJ really is just ridiculously adorable and yeah, sadly instead of it just making me go "aww, cute," it makes me want...to read things like this. OH WELL.

[onneonlights]

i actually think i would even "aww, cute," him while he was being corrupted by everyone. or, idk, while he was being used as a go between for cook and freddie or something. OH JJ.

[riflethrough]

Gahhhh, this is absolutely lovely, and I think you got Freddie's annoyance with Cook really well. Also, everything about this is super hot.

[onneonlights]

thanks very much! i'm glad you liked it :D

[interviewing]

He thinks Cook will probably give him shit for it later, for coming in his boxers just from Cook's hand moving over him through his jeans, but it's the extra friction he needs to finally come and it's fucking good. He bites his lip so hard he tastes the bitter tang of blood on the tip of his tongue, as Cook mutters, "Come on, fucking come on, come for me, babe, come on," to try and keep all the noises in, because he doesn't want to give Cook or JJ any ammunition to fucking mock the noises he makes when he comes, or anything, but he can't keep silent even though the urge to punch Cook briefly rises again, because babe, what the fuck.

UHM. YEAH. AMAZING.

i now worship the ground you walk on. this was fantastically hot.

[onneonlights]

thank you very much! :D