For: sometimeshatter

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For: sometimeshatter
Title: Counting
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Naruto, being slightly dense, jumps to conclusions.
Warnings: boysexing (but isn't that what everyone's here for? lol). Naruto cries, if that bothers some people.
A/N: I rushed this (because I'm a bad, bad person and I can't help but procrastinate) so it didn't turn out fantastic, but I adore gullible/

Comments

[oceansex]

(now that I don't have to worry about blowing my anon, I'll respond to all these lovely comments! <3)

YES YOU DO. BECAUSE EVER SINCE I STARTED WRITING PORN, IT'S PRETTY MUCH ALL I DO. 8|b

I'm really bad at staying serious, so I tossed that line in for the lulz. glad it worked! XD

Sasuke always struck me as the "shows restraint in every possible way except destruction, in which case he just fucks shit up." I'm writing a spin-off/sequel to this that starts with Sakura being doorless lol.

Naruto being dumb = SO MUCH LOVE. I had to put that in there. and I needed a reason for Sasuke to stop putting out, and futon miscommunication was the most silly, inane and ridiculous idea I could come up with. x3

IT'S ONE OF MINE TOO. WHAT COULD BE HOTTER?

I'm really, really, really happy you liked this! as I mentioned in my author's note, I procrastinated like WOAH on this, so I did feel that it came out a little rushed (and there could should've been more porn /pout) but I pumped as much effort into this as I could in a short amount of time, so

[libraire]

lkadjh That was so so cute. Naruto being so upset seems very Naruto, and oh god their lack of communication is also pretty much PERFECT.

And that last line = ♥.

[oceansex]

thank you very much! <3

I was worried about the last line, since it's such a sudden change in tone and I didn't know if it would be jarring or sweet, so glad to hear it is the latter!

[rosalui]

LOL This is good. XDDDD

"It better not be Kiba."

LOL. XD

[oceansex]

thank you! ^o^

Naruto being secretly jealous/suspicious of Kiba is so random and out there I just had to use it. XD

[shinigami39]

HAHAHA. They are such lovable idiots ♥ And Sakura is awesome for putting up with those idiots :D And LOL @ 'it better not be Kiba' XDDD

[oceansex]

yes, yes they are. XD <3 I've always imagined that it's her job to sort of act as mother of the pair.

thank you for the comment!

[trawniki]

"it better not be Kiba," :DDDDD SO MUCH LOVE

[oceansex]

lol THANK YOU <3333