For: sn_exchange

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From: zephyras13
Title: After The World Fell Down
Rating: M
Summary: Naruto has been fighting a war for the life of his neighborhood for the past four years, with no end in sight. His world is violent, arbitrary, and ruthless, but it is simple. It makes sense. And then Uchiha Sasuke fucks everything up.
Warnings: Violence, language, nondescript sex, major

Comments

[gonrie]

Wow. That was a good yakuza fic :)
Loved it ^^

[sowell]

That was awesome! You created a fantastic AU while still maintaining all the different personalities and dynamics. I absolutely loved the way their relationship developed, and the ending was totally satisfying. Awesome fic.

[soleil_et_pluie]

That was flipping fantastic. Naruto and Sasuke both had so much heart in this, despite all the adversity they went through, it made their happy ending so believable. And the tension- the drama- with the scary yakuza element! I was totally hooked when you had them fighting all the time, and the way you built up their attraction through the tense, continually dangerous atmosphere was masterful, well-paced, and totally exciting. I loved their fights!

and every time you talked about them pressing against each other, or grabbing shoulders, or digging with nails- just gah. *____* and you actually made sasuke a human being, which i really appreciate. and the fact that he softened as the fic went on was another stroke of brilliance. <3

And Shikamaru, so good! seriously, kudos.

[yuuko_uchiha]

I have no words! this was~ amazing!
I have to admit that I was resisting to reading because of the angst XD hahaha yeah >.> I'm not handing angst very well right now BUT I chated and read the ending first WOHOHOHO

haha, yeah >.> I got a phone call and forgot what I was going to say! I was so excited >__<

this fic was amazing, I really like yakuza!fics and I can say without a doubt this was my favorite, I loved how you developed their relationship, from wanting to kill eachother to hump each other! hehe. The love confession made me squeal in delight! and all those little details like Shikamaru already knowing and all the town being naive

yes, amazing!

[aishadow]

Wow this story was amazing! I loved the background in this fic, the drama, the storyline, and the way you wrote each character! I adored how you handled their relationship. I just loved everything, I could not stop reading! I'm usually better with reviews but I don't have anything intelligent and encouraging to say other than I think I very well might be in love with you!