For: kitarin

[sne_mod2]

From: sirona_gs
Title: All things of dearest value hang on slender strings.
Rating: R
Summary: Nothing sours a village’s mood faster than a heatwave, and with the anniversary of the Fourth Ninja War on the horizon, the Nanadaime Hokage knows something must be done about it. That’s where Sabaku no Gaara comes in, but Sasuke is not best pleased with his

Comments

[n_anon]

i dont know what it is about the sn exchange but its throwing up a bunch of marvellous fics! i loved everything about this piece. the pace, the POV, Sasuke's voice... everything was so perfectly IC. Love how you described Naruto from Sasukes perspective. Also the fluid way their relationship changed from friends to lovers was just brilliant. Sasuke himself seemed powerless to stop it from happening.

The bathtub scene was my favourite. not just because of the hotness, hehe, but because of the tenderness and intimacy of the whole scene. total win. <3

[missing_nin15]

I thought this was a really fun fic to read! :)

[missing_nin15]

woops sorry, pressed the wrong reply button. ^^;

[sirona_gs]

Thank you! :D

[shinigami002]

This. This. This. was FANTASTIC.

I really liked the idea of a week long festival, and how their relationship unfolded during that time.

I absolutely love the way you write Naruto and Sasuke.

The end was PERFECT. seriously.

I'm grinning ear to ear right now. Fantastic job!

[sirona_gs]

You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that you liked it so much! The ending took a lot of tweaking to get it just right, so yay for it working out! :D Thanks so much for telling me!

[yuuko_uchiha]

This was great, fantastic, awesome, epic! with so much win ;__;

ah~ it's been a while since I got this excited :D it's just that it had everything, it was fun, it was hot, it had the right dose of nosy people, super awesome Naruto who is awesome and I love how protective Sasuke was of him

.:pokes:. I wanna know who you are!

[sirona_gs]

Eeeee! I'm so happy you liked it! I just felt like writing a fun piece without too much fluff but with an emotional centre; I guess this is what came out! I'm kinda really happy with how light it is, especially seeing the emofest most of this round's entries have turned into!

[nilladriel]

A BEACH PARTY. LMFAO WTF i love it.

This really SPARKLES. I love how Sasuke consider Naruto. I love naruto's CRAZY IDEAS and how he manages to get people to somehow go along. That's just so HIM.

In fact, I love Naruto the most in this. It's just so him, the characterization is perfect, anon :D The dialogue sparkles, the banter is enjoyable, and just. aaa. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. this was just light-hearted, pure fun. And the sex was hot.

[sirona_gs]

OMG SO HAPPY YOU LIKED EEEEET!! Naruto's crazy ideas = win, and the way he gets everyone to go along with them to me is pure, 100% Naruto. Thank you so much!! I'm super happy that Naruto's characterisation worked out, he gave me the most trouble out of the lot of 'em!

You are MOST WELCOME. I was craving a light, fun piece like this, so I thought I'd write it for myself if nothing else!

[aurrai]

Highlight for quoted text:
//“Oh yeah? And when was the last time I did something you told me to?” Naruto challenges.

“Kiss me,” Sasuke murmurs.//

I will never, ever stop loving these lines.

[sirona_gs]

ILU 4EVER, BB.