for: gothiclolly

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From: alcedines
Title: my heart is breaking, my body’s aching and I don’t know where to go
Rating: R
Summary: A love story.
Warnings: Character death
Author’s Notes: Thank you to my betas for all their help. The song lyrics at the beginning and end are from “Crystal Ball” by Styx.
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Comments

[gothiclolly]

Whoa. ME LIKES!!! Even though it's so very sad... T_T
It was... unexpected but I like it very much!!! Awww~ *_*
I so like dark themes x333~
Thank you so much for your hard work!! =3

[yuuko_uchiha]

thank you (yeah, I know I'm rude but it's not really the word I'm thinking)
I think this deserves the warning of character-death

[soleil_et_pluie]

This is pretty cool, the way it's constructed. The creepy tone got me and held my attention all the way through.

Some day the author might reply and tell me if I'm right: Naruto got shot, and Sasuke's seeing his ghost and talking to him in the apartment, but in the end, he jumps because Naruto's dead. ._. sadsadsad. At least, that's my interpretation? And sasuke probably never goes inside at all, given the flashes of snow he keeps getting.

ANYWAY, V. COOL. Kudos on your voice, mysterious author, this was a success XD

[hcyanide]

Oh wow, I love how different interpretations can be. XD I thought something completely different... /off to read again

I also loved the way this was written. The slow unveiling was gorgeous. <33

[soleil_et_pluie]

lol what did you think?

[rosalui]

That's the same thing I got out of it! Uh. I hope I didn't read it wrong. XD

[jyusan]

Amazingly written, loved it.

[aamyra]

Holy shit. That was so bizarre, in a good way. Or should I say, so creepy good. And I agree with hcyanide with the whole coming up with different interpretations lmao. But I do like it better this way.

It certainly gave me the chills! Thumbs up!

p.s. I think the title is angsty enough, so it works as a warning to me. :)

[aamyra]

Hahaha, I wouldn't have guessed!

Thank you for sharing!