for: anohana_acc

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From: ezyls_girl
Title: lack the luster
Rating: R
Summary: He has a knack for flipping relationships around like pancakes, all the while teaching you how to grow a garden.
Warnings: wine and cheese, I-wrote-this-while-listening-to-Lady-Gaga, sexual situations, flowers and bulbs, school!AU, snapshot writing, ‘Poe’ yay. >///>
A/N: For the lovely anohana_acc. Hope you

Comments

[hcyanide]

/incoherent
That was beautiful.
Will comment properly later as it's... too early in the morning to give this story justice, but - WOWWWW THE LANGUAGE IS UTTERLY GORGEOUS. <333

[ezyls_girl]

Oh, honeybunny~ your incoherency made my day. ;) thanks so much for reading. ♥

[sowell]

Oh man, that was such a powerful piece. I really, really loved it - the way the timeline skipped around and the complicated mess of Sasuke's feelings for Naruto and feelings for Itachi. I was left with my heart totally aching for Sasuke. Everything was written out with such subtlety and rich detail. This was awesome! Definitely my favorite thing to come out of the exchange so far.

[ezyls_girl]

a;ksfjlasf you make it sound so much awesomer than it actually is. xD; this was a really nice comment. made me all bubbly inside, it did. thanks for readingggg. :)

[orin]

This is stunning. Melancholy and heart wrenching and kind of perfect to be honest. I know we all love the happy ending but this fic encapsulates the reality of people and how they work and how, as amazing and Sasuke and Naruto are together, they're woefully bad at communication and articulating how they feel and they clash with each other and life doesn't always give a happy ending. I love how you made Sakura a part of this one, and how you showed she is an integral part of them. The part that grounds them. And I loved, loved this paragraph-

'(And when Naruto’s long gone, Sasuke finds himself whispering the words. I found a perfect place. A place for us to live. There’s a public shower station and a shampoo stall next to the parlor next to the pool and a boom box and deck chairs and a quiet little back-lot where you can grow flowers and smell cat fur and pretend it’s raining when it’s not and see the stars and listening to crickets chirp and kiss your boyfriend and bury your heart. It’s a nice place, Naruto, it really is. It’s a

[ezyls_girl]

;w; oh dear okay so I'm a little astonished you were able to read so much into it. I certainly didn't have most of this in mind when I started writing. makes me wonder what kind of pathetic outlook I keep on life, it does. XD; Regardless, I-I'm really flattered by this comment, like really you don't even know. And um yeah. You've said a bunch of really wonderful things, and you quoted the paragraph that I worked the hardest on. Thanks for reading. :)

and um. you get this a lot I bet but I simply adore your art and all aspects of it. and the fact that you read and liked my story. i must be dreaming tell me i'm dreaming. ♥____♥ a;slkdfj /dies

[forthelulz90]

*applauds like a nutball and loves forever and ever and ever*

[ezyls_girl]

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[frostheavens]

Wow, that was an incredible ride. Whilst I'm not a huge fan of abstract fics, this was lovely. It was sad and heart-breaky, especially at the end, it was realistic and fiery and beautifully in character. I really, really enjoyed this. Definitely my favourite from the fest so far ♥

[ezyls_girl]

eeeeek. Y-You're making me blush. >///> Thanks for reading omg. ♥