for: kimiessu

Mar 08, 2010 20:32

For: kimiessu
Title: Eclipse Me.
Rating: R
Summary: Emotion and logic, the sun and the moon chase each other and sometimes they meet not as polar opposites but as equals.
Warnings: Angst with poetic undertones, sexual tension, mindfuckery
A/N: It took me a while to get into my head what angst with poetic undertones was but I hope I managed to do it right ( Read more... )

winter 2009, rating: r, submission: fic

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kimiessu March 9 2010, 08:49:49 UTC
Dude. :D Best exchange present ever! ♥ I loved it! And you did nail the angst with poetic undertones, even if it was rather ambiguous when I thought it up. Danke. :DDD

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questofdreams March 11 2010, 22:56:06 UTC
I think the idea of Sasuke as Hokage is a fascinating one, and I like how conflicted Naruto was about it. But I'm glad it ended well :3

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aurrai March 20 2010, 06:02:04 UTC
Hey, this is ricericebabeh but as you can see, I've changed my username.

This is still my favorite line:
"No, you don't get to call me that." Naruto was suddenly furious.

I really love reading angst that ends well for them. I think you captured the drama really well and in the end when the accept each other, it's in-character and believable. Those two certainly won't give an inch to each other, never go down without a fight.

Well done! Keep up the great work!

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