For: bellicosus

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Author: fireun
For: bellicosus
Title: Depth Perception
Rating: PG13
Summary: Like a fine wine, the flavor of a relationship shifts subtly over time.
Warnings: A little bit of a sexual situation here and there, but nothing explicit
A/N: It was a pleasure to write! I hope you enjoy.
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Comments

[faorism]

Lovely and smooth. I especially love the lines: Only Naruto, with his skewed sense of social interaction, would have found those two concepts compatible. Still found those two concepts compatible.

[bellicosus]

♥ ♥ ♥

THANK YOU YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS. The mood in this is so wonderful--that bittersweet romance that grows into something softer. ♥

Only Naruto, with his skewed sense of social interaction, would have found those two concepts compatible.

HAHA. FUCKING LOVED THIS. Naruto is such a dork.

He stopped Naruto in mid sentence with a simple rub of his cheek against Naruto's knee and brushing a kiss in passing. .

NGHHHHHH. LOVE. THIS. MOMENT. SO. MUCH. YOU FUCKING HIT ONE OF MY KINKS RIGHT ON THE FUCKING HEAD. RIGHT ON THE FUCKING HEAD. The simple intimacy of the moment, with Sasuke just being affectionate because he can, and in a subtly sexy and endearing way is just alkdjfa;dkj. Fried my brain cells with JOY. SO MUCH JOY.

The flash, the sound of the camera, had woken Sasuke, and he had woken meaner than ever.

OH BITCHY SASUKE. HOW I ADORE THEE.

Somewhere long the way Naruto had grown up, but had never grown out of his affection and attraction to his rival and lover, had never grown out of that hitch of insecurity that

[bellicosus]

ajdf;adljf I owe you like.... a piece of my soul or something.

[aurrai]

watch Sasuke shift from Uchiha to human.

This really made me stop and reread. Sasuke in a sentence.

The scrapbook idea was great as well. It was a good thing to shape the story around. Sasuke’s deteriorating eyesight and Naruto’s illegible handwriting, sitting on the floor and making Naruto come to him, as you said. The whole thing just flowed. Thank you for writing.

[frostheavens]

The imagery in this is absolutely amazing, and I really enjoyed the kissing. Very adorable. The characterisation was lovely too ♥

[questofdreams]

Really wonderful read. So many lovely images and so many times I wanted to give Sasuke a hug, and then Naruto did (sort of lol) <333