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Aug 24, 2009 14:51

For: habox
Title: Converging Points
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Naruto misses his best friend, and meeting him again in certain circumstances changes his li -- grades forever.
Warnings: None, really! Rating is appropriate for it and should give you an idea ;D
A/N: I got a lot of help for this, from many people. I thank them all, because I wouldn't have ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, summer 2009, submission: fic

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nilladriel August 24 2009, 15:29:21 UTC
Aw, I liked this one. xD What a cocktease ending, but the fluff made up for it in the end. everyone's reactions were hilarious and I really liked the characterization in this, especially Naruto's :]

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nilladriel August 25 2009, 00:35:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. <3

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anonymous August 25 2009, 00:35:46 UTC
I dislike maths a lot too, actually. :P I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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ylmik_wisty August 25 2009, 00:08:17 UTC
Awwwwwwww!!!

Sasuke's such an asshole ;_; but soo so soooo repressed. It amused me especially because Naruto was like 'this just makes things messier, not a good idea' while Sasuke is going all out and crazy.

I though Naruto was hilarious here, and such a klutz. Definately is the type of thing that'd made everyone underestimate him. It was funny, especially from Naruto's pov. Like him wondering if Sakura would want the nerds to ogle her and then she smacks him because HE'S ogling her. XDDDDD I liked the Sakura-Naruto interaction here even more than the manga. Maybe cuz we see clearer Sakura's annoyance and Naruto's utter cluelessness.

And Minato and Kushina were cute, as was their relationship with Naruto. <3 Aww ( ... )

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ylmik_wisty August 25 2009, 00:38:05 UTC
Ahhh, thank you for your comment!

I'm happy you liked the Sakura/Naruto interaction. I find those two so very cute and I think they have great potential for fun moments. :3 I tried really hard to include characters and not suddenly forget them, so I'm glad you enjoyed that too <3333

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cupricanka August 25 2009, 12:36:41 UTC
I so didn't expect Naruto to try for the competition, but now when I think about it, it's only logical... for him. And then, Naruto and Sakura vs. Sasuke, that was so familiar and, because of it, even more melancholic.

The ending more than made up for it. XD

Great read!

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cupricanka August 25 2009, 15:04:02 UTC
Thanks! Super glad you enjoyed it.

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habox August 26 2009, 16:44:41 UTC
That was such a sweet story!
The fantastic characterization and the richness of detail made me smile a lot while reading. This is exactly the kind of SasukexNaruto that I love so much.
I'm so happy that I received a hell of a well-written story!

Thanks so much, you awesome person! >w<
I printed it out and will treasure it forever! ♥

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habox August 26 2009, 23:14:27 UTC
Hee! I'm so, so happy you enjoyed! Really really. ♥! I wasn't sure, since not everyone likes them this way, but I tried my very best, so it makes me ecstatic to know you enjoyed reading it! jaldfhjhjlkdfhj ♥

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