Nice second chapter. The voices are great and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next, now that the cat is out of the bag, so to speak! I like your banner too!
Thanks for the compliment on the voices. Dialogue is the hardest thing for me to write and both these shows are a) very dialogue heavy and b) have such distintive voices I really wanted to do the them justice. Things are going to get interesting soon ;). The banner was made for me by cha and I think she did a truely fantastic job on it.
Aw, I hate to see them all so suspicious of each other, but then they SO would be. Not exactly the trusting types - and for good reason. But I'm guessing they'll work out that they're all on the same side, so I'm looking forward to that :)
Being suspicious of each other is half the fun :) . And your right they have really good reasons not to trust each other...Of course being on the same side doesn't automatically mean they are going to trust each other... Thanks for the compliment on the banner it was made by cha and I think she did an amazing job on it.
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Great looking banner, btw.
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Thanks for the compliment on the banner it was made by cha and I think she did an amazing job on it.
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