Hoshi Hiteki (Sailor Caloris)

Aug 14, 2010 14:36

melashaan requested this one.

Title: Sailor Moon Alternate Revolutions (Under "Stories", naturally)
Writer: Himeno
Summary: "What happens after a temporal accident has changed time and reset the universe? Sailor Moon Alternate Revolutions is a story about what happens after a single incident altered the history of the universe and introduces four new sailor senshi."
Canon: Manga
Rating: 3

Name: Hoshi Hiteki
Senshi Title: Sailor Caloris
Hair: Deep black with a slight wavy blue tint. "Her hair is cut in a slight curve just below the shoulder line and is swept back behind the shoulders. It is straight but tends to curl inward at the ends."
Eyes: Purplish blue, changes shade depending on her mood
Unusual Markings/Colorations: A scar between her shoulder and elbow on her right arm.
Senshi Outfit: Pic by Shadowrose
Basic: "Caloris’ skirt and choker are sky blue while her boots and back bow are navy blue. Her boots reach her knees and are pointed upwards over her knee cap. The top of her boots have a red coloured trim and the boots have flat soles. Sailor Caloris’ front bow is red and is held in place by a round purple brooch. Her sailor collar is purple with a single white stripe. The body suit is white and she has three padded rings on her shoulder. Caloris’ gloves are elbow length with three sky blue bands at the end. A single red stud earring is at the base of each ear and a golden tiara with a dark blue gem rests on her forehead."
Super: "Her skirt is sky blue with a purple band along the bottom edge. The purple goes all the way around the skirt. Sailor Caloris’ boots reach her knees and are pointed upwards over her knee cap, they are navy blue and have red trim. Caloris’ front red bow is held in place by a purple heart shaped brooch. Her sailor collar is purple with a single white stripe; her back bow has ribbons which reach to knee length and are navy blue. The bodice is white with two padded rings over her shoulder. There is also a wing like sky blue shaded see-through attachment with the shoulder pads. Caloris’ gloves are elbow length with three sky blue bands at the end. She has a red stud earring at the base of each ear and two clip-on stud earrings beside the piercing. A golden tiara with a dark blue gem rests on her forehead. Sailor Caloris’ choker is sky blue and has a gold star attached on the front."
Eternal: "She has a double-layered skirt, the top layer being sky blue and the lower layer being purple. Instead of a belt, she has two ribbons; a purple ribbon is attached to the top of her skirt and a sky blue ribbon is just above the first. Both ribbons meet with her skirt on the front of the bodice with a gold star placed at the meeting point. Her boots have flat soles and reach to just below her knees. There is a downward-pointing V at the top on the front of the boots. The boots are white with a sky blue trim and a gold star at the middle of the V. Sailor Caloris’ front bow is red and held in place by a purple star shaped brooch. Her sailor collar is purple with a single gold stripe. The back bow is dark blue with a pair of sky blue ribbons hanging down; the ribbons are long enough to reach her knees. Caloris’ bodice is white with two wing-like sky blue-shaded see-through attachments over the shoulders. The white gloves reach just past her elbows and have three sky blue bands at the end. Her earrings consist of a gold stud with a purple star hanging from a short gold chain; there is one earring in each ear. A golden tiara with a dark blue star-shaped gem rests on her forehead. Sailor Caloris has a V-shaped choker which is sky blue and has a gold star attached on the front."
Celestial: Pic by Dubird "Sailor Caloris’ last fuku is mainly sky blue and purple. The bodice is white with round, sky blue sleeves. On each sleeve is a sheer purple extension. Her skirt is sky blue edged with purple, with a navy blue band on top fronted by a red star. Her collar is short with two layers, one purple and one sky blue. Her gem in front is a red star with two navy wings to the side. Her tiara and choker are both navy with a red star on the front. Her gloves are elbow-length and white, with two narrow bands on the end, one purple and the other sky blue. Her boots are white and almost to her knees, with the back slightly higher than the front and a purple stripe on top. Her bow is purple satin, with wide tails that go down to about her knees."
Other Clothing Descriptions: None
Possessions: Her parents' will and the money from their life insurance. An icebow, the Frozen Star Crystal, various transformation items, and a partly damaged Silver Millennium era spaceship which I assume is what she uses to perform "simulation training" in her spare time in the hopes that NASA will hire her as an astronaut.
Guardians: None

Origin: Nara, Japan. Her father was a Japanese-German businessman of an ambiguous sort that would travel internationally a lot and her mother was a nurse. They were killed when she was 8 when the engine of a plane flying overhead lost pressure and crashed into their vacation home. (Damn. Talk about bad luck. What are the odds?) Hoshi survived by being pushed into the pool. ("The crash investigation eventually found out that the plane had crashed due to major engine and pressure loss.") She was sent to live in an orphanage in Tokyo until she moved into her own apartment at 14.
Silver Millennium: For some reason, Mercury and Mars felt the need to save Hoshi's life during the fall of the Silver Millennium. (She was not a senshi and didn't have a starseed.) So they used their powers to attract a damaged sailor crystal that had stopped on the Caloris Basin to rest and regain some of its power before heading to the Galaxy Cauldron and gave it to her. It absorbed some of their power, hence the reason why she's a mash-up of the two. Said crystal belonged to the senshi of a backwater planet (one with the power of absorbtion) that was the site of the 1st Sailor War. (Chaos tore her apart like string cheese.) She was also part of some Silver Millennium Defense Force.
Connections to Canon: She's a student at T*A. Rei forced her to train with her to develop her psychic abilities further. This has lead her to hate using them.
Senshi Moves: (from weakest to strongest)
Flaming Meteor: Creates a meteor sized fireball that slams into the ground.
Aqua Arc: Sends a stream of water at the target.
Basilisk Rise: Summons a giant fire lizard.
Kelpie Swell: Drowns the enemy in 1,000 l of water shaped like a herd of kelpie.
Fire Mist: Superheated wall of mist, hangs in the air for an unmentioned amount of time.
Glacier Wall: Forms an ice shield with a 3 foot radius.
Steam Inferno: Creates a beam of superheated steam that "roasts" the target.
Hell's Fire Douse: Turns all of the groundwater in the area into steam and melts the ground, the steam then falls back to earth as rain creating a roughly 3 foot deep lake.
Other Special Abilities: She's fluent in English and knows some German and Spanish (or "Deutsch" and "Espanol" according to the profile). She's also good at repairing machinery. Good enough to repair a spacecraft with technology centuries ahead of what we have now. She's telepathic, can receive visions of the future in her dreams, and can use ofuda scrolls like Rei. She might have some acting abilities as well, since one of her dreams is to play Sailor Mercury in one of the Sera Myu musicals. (That or an astronaut, doctor, or scientist.)
Other Traits: The other students at T*A don't like her because she transferred into the school (which is "unheard of" and is "special treatment" to them. She had actually been put on the waiting list by her parents when she was 5). She's just a mash-up of Mercury and Mars who looks like Hotaru (with a dash of Jupiter thrown in).

Comments:

There isn't much to the actual story, only one chapter. Caloris is only in it for a few sentences. The rest of it is about some Australian kid named Wade finding a top secret American spaceship in the outback (which I'm going to assume is Caloris' ship and the Americans just nicked it from somewhere) and using it to travel through time/space to the Sailor Moon universe. Then trying to head to the Time Gate, causing Pluto to fuck up and destroy the timeline that they're in in an attempt to save Crystal Tokyo.

The whole absorbtion and steam based senshi things are pretty decent concepts by themselves. But one can do so much more with the ideas than just a mash-up of two of the canon characters.

And just in case this comes up: No, this journal and this entry are not illegal under copyright law. No, I am not breaking the law by talking about the characters or story without the "express written permission of the site's owner". I don't need it and the notion that I would need it to talk about someone's fanfic is incredibly pretentious.

Samples:

Just read it yourself. It's not that long.

3, celestial object, dead/missing/abusive parent(s)

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