Briana Raleigh (Sailor Galaxy) and the Neo Scouts
Just a quick summary for today. I'm in the middle of something.
Title: Sailor Moon Neo
Writer: Briana Raleigh and Cee Daleesha Raines
Summary: N/A
Canon: Dubbed
Rating: 3
Name: Briana Raleigh, Cidali Raines, Lara De Sol, Claudi Kino, Haley Brookes (Profiles)
Senshi Title: Sailor Galaxy, Sailor Centauri, Sailor Star, Sailor Jemstone, Sailor Earth
Hair:
Briana: Dark blue (the opposite of pink), long, up on a low ponytail “tied at the neck and near the end”
Cidali: Dark pink, long
Lara: Gold, wavy
Claudi: Brown, in a ponytail
Haley: Orange, very long, in wavy pigtails
Eyes:
Briana: Dark blue
Cidali: Black
Lara: Silver
Claudi: Hazel
Haley: Light blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Claudi: A muscular but curvy build and “Japanice” skin
Senshi Outfit:
Briana: Edit by Taleia Raines “Cyan skirt, cyan collar, Yellow pumps, yellow gloves, Black bows, Gold tiara with a cyan and black circle”
Cidali: Picture by Libby “Purple skirt, purple collar, Black boots, black gloves, Yellow bows, Gold tiara with a purple and black circle”
Lara: Edit by Myerida “Pink skirt, pink collar, Black pumps, black gloves, Yellow bows, Gold tiara with a cyan and black circle”
Claudi: “D.o.v. skirt, D.o.v. collar, Black sneaker's, black gloves, Yellow bows, yellow knee-hi socks, Gold tiara with a olive and black circle”
Haley: “Yellow skirt, yellow collar, Blue boots, blue gloves, Black bows, black socks, Gold tiara with a black circle”
Possessions:
Cidali: The Kronus Ring, a talisman. (“Hanging on the necklace was a black ring with purple chain link patterns along it”)
Guardians: None
Origin: Utopia Island. They all attend Utopia Scouts School, where girls are trained to be Sailor Senshi. Haley is the most famous girl on campus, natch. There are two other schools on the island: A nameless one for all of the filthy orphans on the island and the Knights Academy, where boys are taught the fine art of being the destined soul mates and ass savers of all of the girls at Utopia Scouts. The girls are in their final year of school.
Briana: A only child. Her parents are always going on vacations.
Haley: She has a younger sister named Wendie-Lee.
Connections to Canon:
Briana: Amy’s daughter
Lara: Venus’ daughter
Claudi: Jupiter’s daughter
Haley: Serena and a guy named David’s daughter
Senshi Moves: None mentioned in the story
Other Special Abilities:
Cidali: She can control the flow of time using the Kronus Ring. She uses it to change her permanent record and remove all Claudi’s office referrals for bullying so that Lita doesn’t come in and kick the teachers’ asses.
Lara: She takes classes three years ahead.
Annoying Traits:
Claudi: She gets to do whatever she wants because the teachers are afraid of her and her mother.
Haley: She’s already a Sailor Scout since she’s Serena’s kid and she went to the overseas Neo College when she was 10.
Comments: The whole three schools thing reminds me of Winx Club, only there's no evil one.
Samples:
"Class this is Lara De Sol. She is younger than you so be nice to her and let her fit in. I need to get some text books so stay here and be responsable."
As soon as the teacher Mrs Marz was gone the class started talking. Then a tall muscly girl with a brown ponytail stood up. "So "Lara De Sol" ya younga than us?" She said in a funny accent. "Yall wish you where back at Baby School where ya belong?"
"Actually I am 14." Lara said worriedly. She was weedy and short for her age even so compared to the final years she was real tiny. "I am only here to learn just like you."
"I aint here to larn.." The muscly girl said.. "I am here to teach the Babies like ya!" All her friends lauffed.
"Hey listen up Claudi Kino." A pretty girl with long blue hair said standing up. "You oughta stop pickin on the girl. She has no problems with you how about "ya" return the favor?"
"Is that a threat?" Claudi said sizing up the pretty girl. [That sounds a tad vain, calling the character named after you the “pretty girl”. Ehh... *Shrug*] "Briana Raleigh ya are goin down!" Briana was short. Not as short as Lara. But she was so shorter than Claudi. Lara was worried.
"Listen guys I can stick up for my self. I wont be any trouble to you all I promise.."
At that moment Mrs Marz came back in with a pile of text books on Talismens. "Get into groups of two or three to read the text books there are not enough for one each! Dont push and shove like that Claudi.. I mean that is okay you can go alone." Lara was disgasted to see the teacher so afraid of the student.
Mrs Marz sighed at Lara when she was giving out the books. "Lara you can go alone if you want. Wait if Claudi Kino goes alone.. There aint enough text books for you all. Except back in the storage room there is one left."
Lara sighed too. "That is okay I will go get the last book even if its damaged." She got up to leave then saw Briana.
Briana was waving too her. "Lara come over here! You can share with me and Cidali." Lara was scared for a minute then saw the kindness in their eyes and sat down thankfully.
"Oh my gosh thankyou. I was going to be so lonely in this class. Are you sure I can sit with you?"
"Of course you can sit with us! All year even! Why are you in the finals class anyhow?"
Lara was embarassed. "Oh.. I got so high scores on my juniors exam that I was passed straight to the finals.."
"That is great!" Briana said. "Cidali I think we just found usselves a new friend!"
"Really?! I am a friend?!" Lara exclaimed she could not help it. Normally she was a loner because of her smarts.
Cidali giggled and Lara was scared. Then Cidali said. "Of course you are our friend!" So it had been friendly after all..
"Girls! Start reading if you dont mind! You are distracting the class!"
They all giggled again and went to work.
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Sefina sat in her dorm at Utopia Scouts School, thinking about all the immature time-wasters in her classes. All they did every lesson was talk-talk-talk, laugh-laugh-laugh, wasting time while she became the greatest scout of all - even better than ‘Sailor Earth’. Sailor Earth, or Haley, was only a scout right now because her mum was ‘Sailor Moon’. It was all favouritism if you asked Sefina. But unfortunately, no-one did.
Sefina sat front row every class, hand everything in on time, perfected everything she did. However, the teachers only had eyes for those time-wasters. Sefina, although she didn’t like to admit it, was a reject. She had no friends. And she was an acquaintance with the beautiful Thalea Breena Fateila. But she had other friends, and was too busy for Sefina.
Sefina snatched up a silver chain with a small, silver, lightning-bolt charm on it in her slender fingers, grabbed her heavy black book bag and dumped in her books for the next few classes and her pencil-case. She put the necklace in last and walked out of the room.
The halls were filled with the laughter of girls coming back from a short break. The day was gloomy, with a grey sky, dark clouds and a non-stop shower of rain. Just the way that Sefina liked it. A roll of thunder made a group of young girls scream. Sefina rolled her eyes and pushed passed the twirps. Lightning struck as Sefina reached her Advanced Runes and Translation class. She was the first there, as normal. Sefina made a point to be at least 10 or 5 minutes early to class. She had nothing else to do. She took out a thick volume on ancient runes and began to read.
Sefina was soon joined by a giggling group of girls - Briana Raleigh, Cidali Raines and Lara De Sol.
“Hi Sefina!” chirped a perky Briana.
“What are you so happy about?” Sefina asked.
“You don’t need a reason to be happy!” Lara smiled.
Sefina rolled her eyes and went back to her book. A few minutes later, she was again rudely interrupted by a shove in the back.
“Out of ma way.” demanded Claudi Kino. “Ya, and ya baby frund.”
“This ‘baby’ you speak of, who is she?” Sefina asked scathingly.
“The baby ova theer.” Claudi replied, pointing at Lara.
Sefina laughed.
“Friend? Wow Claudi, I didn’t think that you were that thick!”
Claudi’s face turned red. She grabbed Sefina by the arm and pulled her closer.
“You better watch it twirp, cause someone’s gonna get you soom day.” she hissed in her face.
“Claudi!” Briana shouted, stepping towards the girl who was much bigger than her.
“What do you want?” Claudi hissed, stepping towards Briana and throwing Sefina to the floor.
Suddenly, their teacher came out of the classroom.
“Alright, in.” she ordered.
The other girls filed in, along with a laughing Claudi.
Briana held out a hand and helped Sefina up.
“Wanna sit with us this lesson?” Briana asked.
“I didn’t need your help,” Sefina said, folding her thin arms across her chest. “This doesn’t make us friends.”
Sefina walked into the classroom, leaving a stunned Briana Cidali and Lara.
Title: Sailor Moon Neo
Writer: Briana Raleigh and Cee Daleesha Raines
Summary: N/A
Canon: Dubbed
Rating: 3
Name: Briana Raleigh, Cidali Raines, Lara De Sol, Claudi Kino, Haley Brookes (Profiles)
Senshi Title: Sailor Galaxy, Sailor Centauri, Sailor Star, Sailor Jemstone, Sailor Earth
Hair:
Briana: Dark blue (the opposite of pink), long, up on a low ponytail “tied at the neck and near the end”
Cidali: Dark pink, long
Lara: Gold, wavy
Claudi: Brown, in a ponytail
Haley: Orange, very long, in wavy pigtails
Eyes:
Briana: Dark blue
Cidali: Black
Lara: Silver
Claudi: Hazel
Haley: Light blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Claudi: A muscular but curvy build and “Japanice” skin
Senshi Outfit:
Briana: Edit by Taleia Raines “Cyan skirt, cyan collar, Yellow pumps, yellow gloves, Black bows, Gold tiara with a cyan and black circle”
Cidali: Picture by Libby “Purple skirt, purple collar, Black boots, black gloves, Yellow bows, Gold tiara with a purple and black circle”
Lara: Edit by Myerida “Pink skirt, pink collar, Black pumps, black gloves, Yellow bows, Gold tiara with a cyan and black circle”
Claudi: “D.o.v. skirt, D.o.v. collar, Black sneaker's, black gloves, Yellow bows, yellow knee-hi socks, Gold tiara with a olive and black circle”
Haley: “Yellow skirt, yellow collar, Blue boots, blue gloves, Black bows, black socks, Gold tiara with a black circle”
Possessions:
Cidali: The Kronus Ring, a talisman. (“Hanging on the necklace was a black ring with purple chain link patterns along it”)
Guardians: None
Origin: Utopia Island. They all attend Utopia Scouts School, where girls are trained to be Sailor Senshi. Haley is the most famous girl on campus, natch. There are two other schools on the island: A nameless one for all of the filthy orphans on the island and the Knights Academy, where boys are taught the fine art of being the destined soul mates and ass savers of all of the girls at Utopia Scouts. The girls are in their final year of school.
Briana: A only child. Her parents are always going on vacations.
Haley: She has a younger sister named Wendie-Lee.
Connections to Canon:
Briana: Amy’s daughter
Lara: Venus’ daughter
Claudi: Jupiter’s daughter
Haley: Serena and a guy named David’s daughter
Senshi Moves: None mentioned in the story
Other Special Abilities:
Cidali: She can control the flow of time using the Kronus Ring. She uses it to change her permanent record and remove all Claudi’s office referrals for bullying so that Lita doesn’t come in and kick the teachers’ asses.
Lara: She takes classes three years ahead.
Annoying Traits:
Claudi: She gets to do whatever she wants because the teachers are afraid of her and her mother.
Haley: She’s already a Sailor Scout since she’s Serena’s kid and she went to the overseas Neo College when she was 10.
Comments: The whole three schools thing reminds me of Winx Club, only there's no evil one.
Samples:
"Class this is Lara De Sol. She is younger than you so be nice to her and let her fit in. I need to get some text books so stay here and be responsable."
As soon as the teacher Mrs Marz was gone the class started talking. Then a tall muscly girl with a brown ponytail stood up. "So "Lara De Sol" ya younga than us?" She said in a funny accent. "Yall wish you where back at Baby School where ya belong?"
"Actually I am 14." Lara said worriedly. She was weedy and short for her age even so compared to the final years she was real tiny. "I am only here to learn just like you."
"I aint here to larn.." The muscly girl said.. "I am here to teach the Babies like ya!" All her friends lauffed.
"Hey listen up Claudi Kino." A pretty girl with long blue hair said standing up. "You oughta stop pickin on the girl. She has no problems with you how about "ya" return the favor?"
"Is that a threat?" Claudi said sizing up the pretty girl. [That sounds a tad vain, calling the character named after you the “pretty girl”. Ehh... *Shrug*] "Briana Raleigh ya are goin down!" Briana was short. Not as short as Lara. But she was so shorter than Claudi. Lara was worried.
"Listen guys I can stick up for my self. I wont be any trouble to you all I promise.."
At that moment Mrs Marz came back in with a pile of text books on Talismens. "Get into groups of two or three to read the text books there are not enough for one each! Dont push and shove like that Claudi.. I mean that is okay you can go alone." Lara was disgasted to see the teacher so afraid of the student.
Mrs Marz sighed at Lara when she was giving out the books. "Lara you can go alone if you want. Wait if Claudi Kino goes alone.. There aint enough text books for you all. Except back in the storage room there is one left."
Lara sighed too. "That is okay I will go get the last book even if its damaged." She got up to leave then saw Briana.
Briana was waving too her. "Lara come over here! You can share with me and Cidali." Lara was scared for a minute then saw the kindness in their eyes and sat down thankfully.
"Oh my gosh thankyou. I was going to be so lonely in this class. Are you sure I can sit with you?"
"Of course you can sit with us! All year even! Why are you in the finals class anyhow?"
Lara was embarassed. "Oh.. I got so high scores on my juniors exam that I was passed straight to the finals.."
"That is great!" Briana said. "Cidali I think we just found usselves a new friend!"
"Really?! I am a friend?!" Lara exclaimed she could not help it. Normally she was a loner because of her smarts.
Cidali giggled and Lara was scared. Then Cidali said. "Of course you are our friend!" So it had been friendly after all..
"Girls! Start reading if you dont mind! You are distracting the class!"
They all giggled again and went to work.
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Sefina sat in her dorm at Utopia Scouts School, thinking about all the immature time-wasters in her classes. All they did every lesson was talk-talk-talk, laugh-laugh-laugh, wasting time while she became the greatest scout of all - even better than ‘Sailor Earth’. Sailor Earth, or Haley, was only a scout right now because her mum was ‘Sailor Moon’. It was all favouritism if you asked Sefina. But unfortunately, no-one did.
Sefina sat front row every class, hand everything in on time, perfected everything she did. However, the teachers only had eyes for those time-wasters. Sefina, although she didn’t like to admit it, was a reject. She had no friends. And she was an acquaintance with the beautiful Thalea Breena Fateila. But she had other friends, and was too busy for Sefina.
Sefina snatched up a silver chain with a small, silver, lightning-bolt charm on it in her slender fingers, grabbed her heavy black book bag and dumped in her books for the next few classes and her pencil-case. She put the necklace in last and walked out of the room.
The halls were filled with the laughter of girls coming back from a short break. The day was gloomy, with a grey sky, dark clouds and a non-stop shower of rain. Just the way that Sefina liked it. A roll of thunder made a group of young girls scream. Sefina rolled her eyes and pushed passed the twirps. Lightning struck as Sefina reached her Advanced Runes and Translation class. She was the first there, as normal. Sefina made a point to be at least 10 or 5 minutes early to class. She had nothing else to do. She took out a thick volume on ancient runes and began to read.
Sefina was soon joined by a giggling group of girls - Briana Raleigh, Cidali Raines and Lara De Sol.
“Hi Sefina!” chirped a perky Briana.
“What are you so happy about?” Sefina asked.
“You don’t need a reason to be happy!” Lara smiled.
Sefina rolled her eyes and went back to her book. A few minutes later, she was again rudely interrupted by a shove in the back.
“Out of ma way.” demanded Claudi Kino. “Ya, and ya baby frund.”
“This ‘baby’ you speak of, who is she?” Sefina asked scathingly.
“The baby ova theer.” Claudi replied, pointing at Lara.
Sefina laughed.
“Friend? Wow Claudi, I didn’t think that you were that thick!”
Claudi’s face turned red. She grabbed Sefina by the arm and pulled her closer.
“You better watch it twirp, cause someone’s gonna get you soom day.” she hissed in her face.
“Claudi!” Briana shouted, stepping towards the girl who was much bigger than her.
“What do you want?” Claudi hissed, stepping towards Briana and throwing Sefina to the floor.
Suddenly, their teacher came out of the classroom.
“Alright, in.” she ordered.
The other girls filed in, along with a laughing Claudi.
Briana held out a hand and helped Sefina up.
“Wanna sit with us this lesson?” Briana asked.
“I didn’t need your help,” Sefina said, folding her thin arms across her chest. “This doesn’t make us friends.”
Sefina walked into the classroom, leaving a stunned Briana Cidali and Lara.