Lily Blake
Title: Sailor Star
Writer: Lady-Raini
Summary: “A new scout had appeared, and aparently she knows who the scouts really are just by looking at them. A new evil surfaces trying to control the universe all over again.”
Canon: Dubbed anime
Rating: 2
Name: Lily Blake
Senshi Title: Presumably Sailor Star
Hair: Strawberry blonde
Eyes: Blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Senshi Outfit: Not described
Possessions: None
Guardians: Meteor, a black cat with a silver star on her forehead.
Origin: Since she was 5, she lived with her father Mark in London. They decide to move to Tokyo due to Mark’s abusive girlfriend.
Connections to Canon: Rita Blake (Reika Nishimura, Motoki’s girlfriend)’s younger sister and Mina’s friend when she lived in England. She has Algebra 2 at Crossroads High with her.
Senshi Moves: None mentioned
Other Special Abilities: None
Annoying Traits: None
Comments: The last half of Chapter 1 and the first half of Chapter 2… nearly every single sentence begins with “She”.
Samples:
The next morning, Lily awoke when she heard her alarm go off. She got up and yawned. She went into her bathroom and took her pajamas off.
She turned the water on then the shower faucet. She stepped into the hot shower and felt the water beat down upon her head and neck.
She washed her body and her hair. She turned the water off and wrapped a towel around her body. She stepped out of the tub and walked into her room. She went to her dresser and pulled out a white pair of bikini style underwear and white bra.
As she put deodorant on, she want into her closet and put on a short blue ruffle skirt and a white top.
She put on black shoes with white socks. Mina had told her the colors. She left her room grabbing her keys and bag.
She walked into the kitchen and put her bag on the table.
She searched the fridge and pulled out the milk. She went into the pantry and got a box of cereal. She placed the milk and cereal onto the counter. She took a bowl and spoon out and poured the cereal and milk into a bowl.
Lily put the cereal and milk away and started to eat her breakfast. After she finished her breakfast, she looked at the clock. It read 6:32 a.m.
She got up and washed her bowl and spoon. She walked to the bathroom and brushed her teeth. She checked herself in the mirror and left the bathroom.
She walked back to the kitchen and picked her bag and keys up. She walked toward the door and left.
She walked down the hall and into the elevator. She pushed the button for the first floor. When the elevator doors opened, she walked out of the elevator and walked outside.
She walked to the street and took a right to the bus stop. After about ten minutes of waiting, the bus finally arrived. The doors opened and she stepped into the bus.
She put a few coins in the money slot and walked to a empty seat. After a few more minutes, the bus closed its doors and moved ahead. Five minutes later, the bus stopped in front of Crossroads High School.
She got off the bus, and walked up the walkway to the school. As she walked between the gate and front doors, she felt eyes looking at her.
She ignored the stares since she was used to it as she walked into the building. She looked around and saw a sign that read ’Main Office,’ She walked over to the door and went inside. She walked up to the front desk and waited.
The assistant put the phone down and smiled. “Hello, welcome to Crossroads High School. Can I help you?” the lady asked.
“Yes I am new here in town, and I wanted to enroll myself into this school. If it is alright.” says Lily softly.
“Alright,” says the lady while smiling. “Here are the papers. Do you want to go to class today or tomorrow?” says the lady while handing Lily the papers.
“Well, I would like to start class as soon as possible.” says Lily.
Lily took a pen and filled out the papers. After 20 minutes, she handed the papers back to the lady. “Here you go. I hope I did it right.” says Lily.
The lady takes the papers except one and puts them into a folder that now had her name on it. “Take this paper to the counselors office, the counselor Mrs. Rumeki will be your counselor if you need anything, just ask her.” says the lady.
Lily took the paper and her things and left.
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A meow was heard, and the six girls turned around to see two cats, a white one and a black cat with crescent moons on their foreheads.
“Artemis!” Mina says while picking up the white cat.
“Luna!” Serena also says while picking up the black cat.
Both the cats had turned to Lily and started to stare at her. Lily had felt the cats staring at her, and she turned her head to give them a staring contest. After a minute, the three of them had not even blinked at all. Another minute passed and Artemis blinked. Luna looked exhausted from staring. A minute later, Luna blinked and meowed at losing.
Lily and the other girls started laughing. Then there was a mew that didn’t come from Luna or Artemis. Lily turned her head and saw a black cat with a silver star on its forehead. “Here kitty, kitty.” says Lily while holding out her hand.
The cat walked up to her slowly and sniffed her hand for her scent. Then the cat walked into her lap and sat down purring hard.
Lily smiled and scratched the cat behind the ears. As she did so, she got a memory relapse. Ten minutes later, she looked down at the cat. “Meteor is her name.” she said.
The girls just look at her, but Luna and Artemis look at Meteor. The end of lunch bell rang and Luna, Artemis, and Meteor walked over to the tree and sat. The girls picked their things up and went to class.
“Well, Luna, Artemis. Its been a long time.” says Meteor.
“We had a feeling that it was you Meteor.” says Luna.
“What Luna? Are you jealous that I might take Arti here?” says Meteor with a smirk on her face. [Meteor is either really paranoid or really vain.]
At that, Luna blushed and gets angry. “Say what you want Meteor. I don’t care.” Luna says. Then turns and walks away.
Writer: Lady-Raini
Summary: “A new scout had appeared, and aparently she knows who the scouts really are just by looking at them. A new evil surfaces trying to control the universe all over again.”
Canon: Dubbed anime
Rating: 2
Name: Lily Blake
Senshi Title: Presumably Sailor Star
Hair: Strawberry blonde
Eyes: Blue
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Senshi Outfit: Not described
Possessions: None
Guardians: Meteor, a black cat with a silver star on her forehead.
Origin: Since she was 5, she lived with her father Mark in London. They decide to move to Tokyo due to Mark’s abusive girlfriend.
Connections to Canon: Rita Blake (Reika Nishimura, Motoki’s girlfriend)’s younger sister and Mina’s friend when she lived in England. She has Algebra 2 at Crossroads High with her.
Senshi Moves: None mentioned
Other Special Abilities: None
Annoying Traits: None
Comments: The last half of Chapter 1 and the first half of Chapter 2… nearly every single sentence begins with “She”.
Samples:
The next morning, Lily awoke when she heard her alarm go off. She got up and yawned. She went into her bathroom and took her pajamas off.
She turned the water on then the shower faucet. She stepped into the hot shower and felt the water beat down upon her head and neck.
She washed her body and her hair. She turned the water off and wrapped a towel around her body. She stepped out of the tub and walked into her room. She went to her dresser and pulled out a white pair of bikini style underwear and white bra.
As she put deodorant on, she want into her closet and put on a short blue ruffle skirt and a white top.
She put on black shoes with white socks. Mina had told her the colors. She left her room grabbing her keys and bag.
She walked into the kitchen and put her bag on the table.
She searched the fridge and pulled out the milk. She went into the pantry and got a box of cereal. She placed the milk and cereal onto the counter. She took a bowl and spoon out and poured the cereal and milk into a bowl.
Lily put the cereal and milk away and started to eat her breakfast. After she finished her breakfast, she looked at the clock. It read 6:32 a.m.
She got up and washed her bowl and spoon. She walked to the bathroom and brushed her teeth. She checked herself in the mirror and left the bathroom.
She walked back to the kitchen and picked her bag and keys up. She walked toward the door and left.
She walked down the hall and into the elevator. She pushed the button for the first floor. When the elevator doors opened, she walked out of the elevator and walked outside.
She walked to the street and took a right to the bus stop. After about ten minutes of waiting, the bus finally arrived. The doors opened and she stepped into the bus.
She put a few coins in the money slot and walked to a empty seat. After a few more minutes, the bus closed its doors and moved ahead. Five minutes later, the bus stopped in front of Crossroads High School.
She got off the bus, and walked up the walkway to the school. As she walked between the gate and front doors, she felt eyes looking at her.
She ignored the stares since she was used to it as she walked into the building. She looked around and saw a sign that read ’Main Office,’ She walked over to the door and went inside. She walked up to the front desk and waited.
The assistant put the phone down and smiled. “Hello, welcome to Crossroads High School. Can I help you?” the lady asked.
“Yes I am new here in town, and I wanted to enroll myself into this school. If it is alright.” says Lily softly.
“Alright,” says the lady while smiling. “Here are the papers. Do you want to go to class today or tomorrow?” says the lady while handing Lily the papers.
“Well, I would like to start class as soon as possible.” says Lily.
Lily took a pen and filled out the papers. After 20 minutes, she handed the papers back to the lady. “Here you go. I hope I did it right.” says Lily.
The lady takes the papers except one and puts them into a folder that now had her name on it. “Take this paper to the counselors office, the counselor Mrs. Rumeki will be your counselor if you need anything, just ask her.” says the lady.
Lily took the paper and her things and left.
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A meow was heard, and the six girls turned around to see two cats, a white one and a black cat with crescent moons on their foreheads.
“Artemis!” Mina says while picking up the white cat.
“Luna!” Serena also says while picking up the black cat.
Both the cats had turned to Lily and started to stare at her. Lily had felt the cats staring at her, and she turned her head to give them a staring contest. After a minute, the three of them had not even blinked at all. Another minute passed and Artemis blinked. Luna looked exhausted from staring. A minute later, Luna blinked and meowed at losing.
Lily and the other girls started laughing. Then there was a mew that didn’t come from Luna or Artemis. Lily turned her head and saw a black cat with a silver star on its forehead. “Here kitty, kitty.” says Lily while holding out her hand.
The cat walked up to her slowly and sniffed her hand for her scent. Then the cat walked into her lap and sat down purring hard.
Lily smiled and scratched the cat behind the ears. As she did so, she got a memory relapse. Ten minutes later, she looked down at the cat. “Meteor is her name.” she said.
The girls just look at her, but Luna and Artemis look at Meteor. The end of lunch bell rang and Luna, Artemis, and Meteor walked over to the tree and sat. The girls picked their things up and went to class.
“Well, Luna, Artemis. Its been a long time.” says Meteor.
“We had a feeling that it was you Meteor.” says Luna.
“What Luna? Are you jealous that I might take Arti here?” says Meteor with a smirk on her face. [Meteor is either really paranoid or really vain.]
At that, Luna blushed and gets angry. “Say what you want Meteor. I don’t care.” Luna says. Then turns and walks away.