Sarafina Lee Moonita

[smsues]

Title: When it all started
Writer: moonlover825
Canon: Manga, Yugi-Oh, Fruits Basket
Rating: 3

Name: Sarafina Lee Moonita
Senshi Title: Not mentioned
Species: Spawnificus repulsivum
Hair: Ebony, standard odangos
Eyes: Clear blue with “a thin, tinge of gold encircling her pupils.”, they change to gold when she sees all of her old friends

Comments

[sailormac]

“Well, if I was an Odango-Atama, then you I would say you are a baka!” Sara retorted, her now blue eyes boring holes into his head.

Wow, her eyes are power drills? That *is* a speshul Mary Sue powaaa!

(And, argh, fanbrat Japanese! KILL IT WITH FIRE!)

[mimisgrotto]

She had BETTER get to Senshi form, I do NOT want to waste that NAME!

'Sarafina', Princess of Planet Cling-film.

I wonder if Suethors know that flecks or discolourations appearing in the irises is often a sign of illness or disease...

[naruto_marysues]

This is the second 'goldeny pupil' sue I've seen in only 3 minutes flat. God must hate me today.

Maybe it's because I haven't actually sat and watched the entire Helios arc, but I see here with this big ass horn on her head and turning into a sparklypoo pony whenever someone of the opposite gender hugs her...

A nearly redeeming thought... NEARLY

[naruto_marysues]

Oh, and dare I add that the fangirl japanese just kills me. *brandishes le spork*