There are a lot of OCs in this fic. (16 “major” ones to be exact.) These are just the first 5.
Title:
Grecian SenshiWriter: Bunny Aino, but it's on
Alfonso-T-D-O-M's account. He also wrote some parts of the story along with Ashleigh Kaiba.
Canon: Anime, Yugi-Oh, Dragonball Z, Yu Yu Hakusho, some elements from Cardcaptor Sakura and Tenchi Muyo!, and references to pretty much every single cartoon in existence.
Rating: 5
Name: Illuria Raybrandt, Rhena “Ri” Lockheart, Trina “Tri” Crescent, Scarlet Williams, Kitty Love
Senshi Title: Sailor Gaia, Sailor Chronos, Sailor Selene, Kaitou Salvia, Sailor Aphrodite
Species: Kitty is half cat demon. The others, once the story gets over the "random villain every other day" hump, are Puella centraquestis.
Hair:
Illuria: Lavender, long, held back in a Rikku-esque ponytail.
Rhena: Strawberry blonde, shoulder length, up
Moonbay/May style pigtails, becomes Ariel red and butt length when she's possessed by her yami.
Trina: Not mentioned, turns black and spiky when she's possessed by her yami.
Scarlet: Brown with red highlights
Kitty: Brown with blonde highlights, it becomes curly and loses the highlights when she’s in her Genesis form.
Eyes:
Illuria: Emerald green
Rhena: Green, blue, and hazel
Scarlet: Light brown
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Kitty: A brown tabby cat tail. She gets cat ears in her senshi form.
Senshi Outfit:
Dolls by MimiIlluria:
Basic: "She was dressed in a black senshi fuku with icy blue bows and a pair of silver wings (Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne style). She had long, lavender hair, pulled up in a ponytail with golden rings around certain parts of it, with two hair clips, designed to look like angel wings, with one on each side (think Wedding Peach). Her tiara had a six-point-star shaped sapphire in the middle of it."
Genesis: “When the wings parted, she was wearing the same fuku, only her wings were white with icy blue tips, her skirt was gold, with a black line running through it, her shoulder pads were gold, her hair was now down, with no bow, she no longer had a mask, covering her eyes, and her bows and elbow guards were gold. Her centerpiece was now an icy blue heart and her black collar had icy blue lines on it.”
Rhena:
Basic: Icy blue with lavender bows and lavender Black Magician Girl boots.
Genesis: “When the light faded, she was in her new senshi fuku, which was like Illuria’s, only without the wings, and with gold, icy blue, and lavender, instead of gold, black, and icy blue.”
Trina: Navy blue with silver bows, silver go-go boots, and a gold tiara with a silver jewel.
Scarlet: Purple top with a bow around the neck, dark pink skirt, black pants under the skirt, black boots, and fingerless white gloves with gold finger guards.
Kitty:
Basic: Royal blue with light orange bows.
Genesis: “It looked like her regular fuku, only it had a red skirt with a blue line running through it, red bows, red shoulder puffs, a blue collar with orange lines on it, and an orange heart in the center.”
Possessions: All of them have Anzu's Mallet of Doom for random beating-people-over-the-head action.
Illuria: A gold transformation pen with silver wings on it, the Sennen Mirror, Kisara, a yami, (Dark spirit that is associated with the sennen items that were alive in ancient Egypt.) a sword named Seventh Heaven, St. Joan’s Cross, a gold cross with red jewels on it that belonged to Joan of Arc that has the soul of a princess who fought Beryl (named Fathia) inside it, the fifth Blue Eyes White Dragon card, (Seto convinced Pegasus to make one for her.), and the Glaive of Genesis, a scythe that she receives with her Genesis upgrade. (Scythes are not glaives.)
Rhena: An amethyst key with a sennen eye on it, a transformation pen, the Garnet/Amethyst Wand, which has the Sennen Orb inside it and turns into the Amethyst Staff when she upgrades to her Genesis form, her yami Rinako, a car, and a collection of 1,000 Orlando Bloom pictures that is mentioned in passing.
Trina: The Sennen Collar (a red collar with gold spikes) and Tsuki, her yami who needs to be either put on Ritalin or put down.
Scarlet: The Blessed Pendule or wrist watch.
Guardians:
Illuria: Terran, a Kero-esque creature with a silver body, red tail, and gold wings. He can turn into a flying lion named Griever.
Trina: Lune-ohki, a Tenchi Muyo! style cabbit with silver fur and a black crescent moon on her forehead who can talk and turn into a human named Luneko.
Origin:
Illuria: London. Her mother was murdered right in front of her by her aunt Azura, who is one of the enemies. (She kills her right after this fact is revealed.)
Rhena: New York.
Trina: Rhena's friend, also from New York.
Scarlet: London. Illuria's older cousin.
Connections to Canon: They're all exchange students to Yugi and Co.'s school.
Illuria: Mamoru's younger sister. Seto sacrificed her to a Blue Eyes White Dragon in his past life in Egypt. He also falls in love with her.
Rhena: Setsuna's sister. Rinako was Pharaoh Atemu's queen. A couple of the guys fight over her, but she eventually hooks up with Yami Yugi.
Trina: Usagi's younger sister. She hooks up with Trunks.
Scarlet: Goten’s new love.
Kitty: Jyounouchi falls in love with her.
Senshi Moves:
Illuria:
Earth Shockwave Splitter: Not described.
Earth Burning Rave: Not described.
Earth Irradication Blade: (sic) Two silver swords appear in her hands as she charges at the enemy.
Genesis Earth Erradication Blade: She slices the ground with the Glaive of Genesis, causing a tremor to go towards the enemy.
Rhena:
Chronos Bombardment: She throws tiny red balls of energy at the enemy, blinding it.
Chronos Explosion: Throws a blast of energy at the enemy, uses the Garnet/Amethyst Wand.
Chronos Apocalypse: Not described
Chronos Distortion: Freezes the enemy for 30 seconds.
Trina:
Selene Twin Tiara Action: Moon Tiara Action, only doubled.
Selene Moonlight Aura: She forms a ball of energy in her hands from moonlight and throws it at the enemy.
Scarlet:
Mist Hide: Creates a fog.
Side Throw: Throws gold shurikens at the enemy.
Kitty:
Spirit Arrow: Self-explanatory.
Aphrodite Celestial Arrows Rain: She shoots lots of arrows at the enemy.
Aphrodite’s Prayer: She chants a prayer and lightning comes from the sky and strikes the enemy.
Other Special Abilities:
Illuria: Her mirror can reflect any attack and allow her to possess people, talk to spirits, revive the memories of anyone turned into a youma, and trap people in the Shadow Realm. She plays the guitar. When she was younger, she was saved from her aunt by a deus-ex-machina blast of light from the symbol on her forehead. She has prophetic dreams in her sleep.
Rhena: The orb can stop time, create shields, and allow her to show people her memories and let her see others'. She plays the piano and keyboard.
Trina: The collar lets her turn into any animal. She plays drums and guitar.
Scarlet: She plays the electric bass.
Annoying Traits: Fangirl Japanese. Jou and Honda immediately fall in love with Illuria and Rhena, respectively, the moment they walk in the classroom. The school lets Trina and Scarlet wear the boy's uniform because they're tomboys.
Illuria: She had an emoy relationship with a boyfriend that turned out to be evil. She's ends up killing this one though.
Comments: Repeat offenders.
They didn't like my other entry. But hey, that's to be expected.
This is pretty much
Yasashii Yoake with a different plot and the bad aspects amplified 10x. (Well, at least there was some improvement. I dropped the other entry down to a 4 after I saw this.) There's more unnecessary Japanese, more unnecessary author's notes in the middle of the chapters (there are so many of them that they actually kill all of the suspense and foreshadowing in some parts), more unnecessary song lyrics, and... unfortunately... more sugar high humor. Thankfully, those things are toned down when Alfonso takes over. But then the whole thing starts to seem like two different stories. (This story, supposedly, was edited right after it was deleted for those song lyrics that are still there. I can’t imagine how bad the first version was.)
Samples:
" Oh, he’s nothing compared to my yami." Trina said. She pulled out a red collar with Gold spikes (See, 00puppydawg! I added spikes!) on it and a Sen - Nen eye on it. [Little known fact: Punks did exist during the time of the pharaohs.]
" Cool Sen - Nen item!" Illuria exclaimed. She showed Trina her Sen - Nen Mirror and explained it to her, then put it away. Terran tried to escape for a second, but Illuria pushed him back in. The other students stared at her like she was crazy and Illuria replied with, "I have a very full backpack."
"My Sen-Nen Collar allows me to turn into any kind of animal I want and make full use of their powers." Trina said. " I got it in Egypt at the same time Rhena got her Sen-Nen Orb, and that’s how I met my yami, Tsuki."
" Cool. May I meet Tsuki?" Illuria asked.
" Trust me. You don’t. She’s too wild." Rhena whispered.
" I don’t care." Illuria whispered back.
" Me neither." Scarlet said.
" All right." Trina said. She closed her eyes. Her Sennen Collar glowed.
" NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Rhena shouted. Everyone stared at her and she stopped shouting. The Sen - Nen Collar stopped glowing and Trina opened her eyes. They were as wide as saucers. Her hair was a little longer, but standing up on her head, spiky, and black. Tsuki ran to every table at light speed, grabbed all the sugar packets, and dumped them in her mouth, not caring about the packaging(She eats anything that has sugar in it.).
" PARTY AT MY HOUSE AT SIX! BRING LOTS OF SUGAR!" Tsuki shouted. She proceeded to bounce up and down like a kangaroo and run around the cafeteria like a cheetah.
" Told you she was wild." Rhena whispered. Illuria and Scarlet nodded in agreement.
" I like her. Besides, a party beats homework." Scarlet said. Rhena and Illuria sweatdropped.
" Um……Tsuki……are you all right?" Illuria asked. Tsuki looked at her with her saucer like eyes.
“ Me all right! Me all right! Me just want sugar, lots of sugar! Suuuuuuuuuuggggggggggaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrr!” Tsuki exclaimed. She did a dance on top of the table. Thankfully, all the teachers were in the teachers’ lounge at the moment.
" You look strange, not that I don’t like it." Scarlet said. Tsuki looked at Scarlet and laughed.
" Me no strange and me no schizophrenic! [
No.] Me Tsuki, and me want suuuuuuuuuuggggggggaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr, so GIMME GIMME GIMME!" Tsuki shouted. Rhena , Scarlet, and Illuria sweatdropped. Illuria pulled out a box of Oreos. " YAY! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR! SUGAR!" Rhena turned into Rinako. Now instead of strawberry blonde, her hair was Ariel red, and all the way down to her bottom.
" Tsuki! Shame on you! Bad yami! Behave yourself!" Rinako scolded. Tsuki looked at Rinako, smiled, then gave her a raspberry. Tsuki then jumped up and down on the table, licking a lollypop she found under it. “ Tsuki! Put that down! You have no idea where that’s been!” Rinako scolded. [Try using a rolled up newspaper… or shove celery and carrots down her throat…] Tsuki gave Rinako another raspberry, then bounced off the walls like a rubber ball.
“ No! It’s candy, me like candy, and it taste good, so me want it! Candy! Candy! Caaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnddddddddddddyyyyyyyyyyyyy!” Tsuki exclaimed, bouncing up and down again. Rinako scolded her again, only to be annoyed with the sounds of, “ You’re not the boss of me! You’re not the boss of me! I’m my own boss! No one commands me!”. Rinako got ready to pummel Tsuki, when Kisara (Illuria transformed during their argument…) stopped her.
" It’s okay. She can have a few of my hikari’s Oreos. Here. Don’t eat-" Kisara started, but was too late. Tsuki grabbed the Oreos, Rhena’s hot chocolate, grabbed a jar of peanut butter, a jar of jelly, and Illuria’s cup of coffee, Scarlet’s ice cream, some chocolate milk, and another container of pudding, then dumped everything in her mouth. " them all." Illuria finished.
" TTTTTTTTTSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!" Rinako shouted.
-Um, Ru, people are staring at us maybe I’d better take over.-
--NO WAY! I want to teach that tsuki no gakki (moon brat…Rinako’s making a pun on her name…) a lesson!--
-Rinako…-
--Oh all right!--
With that, Rhena took over again. Kisara also let Illuria take over. Illuria whispered to them.
" Sick." Illuria whispered. Rhena nodded in agreement. Scarlet however shook her head, then made her comment.
" Sick isn’t strong enough a word. DISGUSTING is more like it. As much as I like sugar, I would NEVER do THAT." Scarlet said. She pretended to throw up at the sight of Tsuki eating so much sugar.
" I warned you." Rhena replied. Tsuki was now dancing on the tables, stealing candy and anything sweet from all the other students. When complained at, she did the wedgie dance (from The Wild Thornberrys Movie) on the complainers’ heads, causing them to run off.
" MORE SUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR!" Tsuki shouted, not caring that everyone else was staring at her. She did the happy dance on their table. Thankfully, Rhena, Illuria, Trina, and Scarlet had all finished their lunches. [None of the teachers never heard about it, and lunch ladies are always old and deaf so who cares about them.]
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The Inner Senshi enroll at Domino High School, just in time for the talent show. Illuria, Trina, Scarlet, Rei, Minako, Mai, Isis, Shizuka, and Makoto sign up, while Ami signs up to do sound. The school snob, Leanna (transferred from America…) brags about how she’s such a good dancer and signs up. [She apparently just transferred to sign up for the talent show and mock Rhena. (She was in her elementary school too.) She also stole her boyfriend as one point in the past.] Her little fanclub wholeheartedly supports her. She tells Rhena to stay away from Yami and not to bother signing up for the talent show. Usagi makes a remark about putting Leanna in her place and signs up. Rhena tells Usagi she had guts to sign up, and Usagi tells her she signed Rhena up. Rhena is furious and is about to charge Usagi, but Illuria, Trina, and Scarlet hold her back. The four decide to form a band, as well as do solo acts. Later on, Illuria, Trina, Scarlet, and Rhena have to fight off a youma attacking Honda, and are very late to the Talent Show. Azureniko shows up and grabs a fuming, screaming Trina, forcing Iluria and Scarlet to go fignt Azureniko, while Rhena stays alone and fights the youma. Rhena contacts Usagi, and tells her to stall for time, while they fight. Luna signs a reluctant Usagi up, and forces her to do a bunch of lame but funny acts. Meanwhile, Illuria and Scarlet struggle with Azureniko. They manage to free Trina, and with her help, they force Azureniko to retreat. While all that is going on, Rhena is struggling with the Commander. Rhena is about to cream the Commander, but he shoots her in the leg, making her unable to move. The Commander is about to kill Rhena, when someone comes to her rescue: Sailor Aphrodite. Aphrodite helps Rhena up and distracts the youma. Rhena destroys it. When Illuria, Scarlet and Trina arrive, they meet Aphrodite. They head back to school, just in time for the talent show. Illuria sings, Scarlet plays her electric bass, then they perform with Rhena and Trina as a band, with Trina on drums and Rhena on keyboard. Trina plays a drum solo, and then Rhena sings. Illuria gets first in singing, Rhena gets second in singing, Scarlet gets first in variety, Trina gets second in variety, They all win the best band award, Anzu wins in dance, Shizuka comes in second, and the overall winner is…………Usagi? Leanna is furious and storms off stage. The judge says that it wasn’t good quality, but it was good quantity. Usagi, now wearing a full body cast, due to all her accidents on stage, happily takes the award.
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----------------------- Flashback (Valentines Day one year ago)……………………
A young girl with long lilac hair walked down the street with a cute looking stuffed animal. She was dressed in a short grey shirt with black Rockport boots, along with a white shirt, a burgundy jumper, a black tie and a brown bag on her back. (That was actually Ashleigh-Kaiba’s school uniform. When I went to a charter school in eighth grade, I had to wear a uniform, consisting of a black polo shirt with a collar, khaki pants, white tennis shoes, a belt that had to be worn at all times, and a name tag that also had to be worn at all times. I didn’t mind it, but I did mind my Canterbury Children’s Chorus uniform. I had to wear a stupid blue pleated skirt, blue stockings, a white blouse, a tacky green vest, tacky black shoes, and a little plaid tie to top it off. I looked like a schoolgirl from the 50’s!)
"So your gym teacher really was possessed by Anima, I like the way you handled yourself back there Illuria." The strange stuffed animal spoke, which would have shocked most people "Even I was impressed!"
The girl laughed
"Thanks Terran, but do you really think I can defeat Anima by myself?" Illuria asked as she crossed the road "I don't want to get Scarlet involved in this."
Terran nodded "It's not her fight. Anima is looking to fight you because of your past life. He wants revenge against the man you were in love with!"
Illuria frowned.
"Me in love? Yeah right! Sometimes I can barely stay interested!" She admitted "The guys around here are so stupid, and Ryan really bugs me now!" (Ryan was an old boyfriend of Ashleigh-Kaiba’s! He reminds me of the jerk who dumped me after three days!)
Terran sweatdropped, Illuria usually ended up going out with the same types of guys. But that wasn't the matter at hand here!
"So were going to the tower, right?" Terran asked "That's where Anima said he would be!"
"Yeah. I'm not looking forward to seeing him though!" The girl complained.
Illuria turned left at the next corner; she picked up her pace a little until she began to sprint towards an old abandoned building.
Looking forward, not behind
Everybody's got to cross that line
Free me now to give me a place,
Keep me caged and free the beast
Falling faster, time goes by, fear is
Not seen through these eyes
What there was will never be, now
I'm blind and cannot see
Once inside the old white brick tower, Illuria placed Terran on the ground and reached into the pocket on her skirt and pulled out a fancy looking pen that was gold with silver wings, she then thrust it into the air.
"Wait!" Terran called, interrupting Illuria.
Illuria looked at him, and a white light surrounded her guardian. A white pair of wings enveloped around him and the soon parted revealing a huge sandy brow lion with a reddish brown mane and tail tip.
"Griever?" She asked curiously tilting her head slightly.
"I have something for you, it may be crucial for winning this battle!" With that Griever posed him self as if he was about to roar and bright particles of light began to gather in front of the girl.
When the light's faded a beautiful golden cross with red jewels in it appeared in front of her.
"This cross once belonged to Joan of Arc, it's said that only one with the courage of her could use it and I think I just found it the perfect owner!" Griever replied "Now say ‘Courageous Earth power make-up!’"
Illuria did what she was told she thrust the cross high above her self and yelled "Courageous Earth Power Make-up!"
She bought the cross to her chest and held it with her eyes closed as her school uniform faded, several angelic images of herself descended down and merged themselves with the cross and a white sailor fuku formed around her body. A pair of white wings lifted her from the ground where she positioned her arms as if she was on a crucifix, lastly a chain of red roses formed around her and were absorbed into the fuku coloring it an elegant black with icy blue bows.
Kiss me while I'm still alive
Kill me while I kiss the sky
Let me die on my own terms, let
Me live and let me learn
Now I'll follow my own way, and I'll
Live on to another damn day
Freedom carries sacrifice, remember
When this was my life
"So little Sailor Gaia decided to show up, well this will be fun!" A deep voice called out as a figure emerged "You look a little shocked Sailor Gaia, don't you remember me?"
Sailor Gaia scowled.
"Anima!" She yelled '…but he looks so familiar!'
"That's right! It's me, sweetheart!" He laughed as his eyes changed to a soft brown. Illuria's eyes narrowed.
"Ryan? What? Why are you here?" She asked in her own disbelief "You’re Anima?"
Anima leapt at her but she evaded but moving left, a blade of pure crystal appeared in his hands as he went for her again. Sailor Gaia tried to evade but this time she wasn't as swift Anima caught her left arm with the blade creating a thin cut as blood trickled out of it.
"Damn!" She said through gritted teeth, she winced from the pain but shrugged it off afterwards.
"Not so easy, is it?" Anima laughed.
Sailor Gaia threw her hands out in front of her and a sword with a golden handle and an extremely thin blade formed in them.
"Interesting!" Anima laughed "But I wonder, can you really use that sword?"
"Your gonna find out!" She yelled as she raised the blade and bought it down upon Anima who screeched in pain as blood splatted down on to the ground.
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Usagi was happily dancing with Mamoru until……………………….
" Mamo-chan!" an annoyingly squeaky and gakki-like voice squealed. Someone shoved Usagi out of the way, knocking her over, and tackling Mamoru. It was none other than the annoying, squeaky voiced, ugly, tiny, fluffy, pink haired, pink and poofy dress wearing, chibi gakki herself, Chibi Usa. " I missed you so much! Happy Valentines’ Day!"
" And what are you doing here. This party is for teenagers and adults only!" Usagi exclaimed. She was very annoyed that the gakki had barged in on her time with Mamoru. ‘She always does this! Can’t I have one second alone with my Mamo-chan! But, noooo. That baka gakki always steals my time with him’ Usagi thought angrily. She clenched her fists and gritted her teeth.
" I came to spend Valentines’ Day with my most favorite person in the whole wide world, Mamo-Chan!" Chibi Usa exclaimed. She glomped Mamoru, making him turn a shade of purple. Usagi was turning red with anger.
" Need oxygen." Mamoru squeaked. Usagi relieved him by pulling Chibi Usa off of him. She glared at Chibi Usa.
" Well, you should have stayed in Crystal Tokyo and spent it with your parents, or waited to come until tomorrow! Mamo-Chan couldn’t spend the day with me because he had to teach, and I had to be his student, so he agreed to spend the evening with me instead, at this dance! Besides he’s my boyfriend and not yours!" Usagi exclaimed. She gave Chibi Usa a raspberry and grabbed onto Mamoru’s right arm.
" So! I wanna spend time with Mamo-Chan! " Chibi Usa exclaimed. Chibi Usa raspberried Usagi back and grabbed onto Mamoru’s left arm. They tugged on him like he was a rag doll. They started arguing and tugging on Mamoru as usual.
" Mine."
" Mine."
" Mine!"
" Mine!"
" MINE!"
" MINE!"
" MMMMMMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!"
" Mine. Mine! MINE! MMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEE!"
(Seagulls(from Finding Nemo): Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Mine! Bunny: OK! I get the point! Shoo! Shoo!)
The fight was finally broken up by Trina who dragged away Usagi and Rhena, who dragged away Chibi Usa.
“ Let me at that gakki, imouto! Let me at her!” Usagi screamed, trying to squirm out of Trina’s arms and beat up Chibi Usa.
“ No way, onee-chan. She may be a gakki, but she’s still just a kid.” Trina said. While Trina was struggling with Usagi, Rhena was struggling with Chibi Usa.
“ Let me go! I want to spend the day with Mamo-chan!” Chibi Usa exclaimed. Rhena spanked her.
“ Why don’t you give Mamoru some space.” Rhena suggested.
“ No way, Jose! I came all the way from the future just to spend time with Mamo-Chan, and I will!” Chibi Usa exclaimed. She escaped Rhena’s arms and glomped onto Mamoru again. Rhena was about to grab the gakki, but Illuria put her hand on her shoulder.
“ Let the chibi gakki settle her conflict with the bigger gakki (Illuria’s only saying this because she and Rhena don’t care much for Usagi. They hate Chibi Usa though.).” Illuria said. Rhena snickered.