You/Angel (Sailor Black Star)
Let’s see what Quizira can cough up since FF.net’s servers are having a spaz attack from all of the kids that are out of school.
Title: When Blossems Bloom and When Blossems Bloom The Second Stage (sic)
Writer: Firestarter11 (I’ve heard that quote you made up several times before, hon.)
Canon: Dubbed anime
Rating: 4
Name: You/Angel
Senshi Title: Sailor Black Star
Species: Puella angstia
Hair: Blue, straight, shoulder length, black in her senshi form.
Eyes: Red, light purple in her senshi form.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Senshi Outfit: Pictures by Unknown. Not described in the story.
Possessions: A circular transformation brooch with a heart shaped middle and diamond in the center, a flute that can turn into a sword, a wand that looks exactly like the one Sakura uses in Cardcaptor Sakura, and a light blue stuffed rabbit that was given to her by Seiya.
Guardians: Star, a silver cat with a black star on her forehead.
Origin: Her parents and younger brother died in a car accident during a storm a year ago. She lives by herself while her grandmother pays for everything. She is also Princess Angilena of the Stars. What her duties are and whether or not she has a past have not been seen.
Connections to Canon: The bestest friend of all of the Inner Senshi who is in Serena’s class. She is the one who got Darien and Serena together. Seiya is her true love that nobody wants her to be with. Galaxia is obsessed with stealing her starseed because it’s the most important one in the universe (since it’s connected to everyone else’s and would cause all of them to be stolen… or something.) Chibi Chibi saves her when her starseed does get taken. She heals Galaxia instead of Sailor Moon.
Senshi Moves: Various nameless moves that involve playing her flute. One makes a beam of light shoot out of it, another makes the target fall asleep,
Star Powder Evolution: Powder comes out of the flute wand, falls on the enemy, and kills it.
Other Special Abilities: She can play the flute. She can memorize and know how to play an entire song just by glancing at the sheet music once. (She uses this to learn one of the hardest pieces that her teacher had.) She knows Luna belongs to Serena without anyone telling her. She cannot be read by Mercury’s computer.
Annoying Traits: She cries constantly.
Comments: This story has some of the longest run-on sentences I have ever seen.
The author isn’t going to update any of her stories (except for the one that involves her Naruto half-demon ninja sue) because she didn’t get enough ratings.
Oh and, to all of you who want to call troll because of the AOLspeak, keep in mind that Quizilla has absolutely no standards when it comes to spelling and grammar. (At least, none that I know of.)
Samples:
Me: wut happened to me, my hair, my clothes,
Luna: so u are black star, i new it,
???: wait where did that one girl go, u stupid girl u let that girl get away, now galaxia is going to be angry,
Me: who are u,
???: i am hatora, one of the warriors that help galaxia, the queen,
Luna: galaxia, i hardly think that she is the queen,
Hatora: shut up u weak cat,
she uses her powers to blow luna into a wall,
Me: luna,
i run to luna and pic her up in my arms,
Me: oh luna, are u ok,
Luna: i'll be fine, please black star, help the sailor scouts to find the princess,
Me: i will,
thats when i hear foot steps behind, me it was darien, he just stares at me,
Hatori: who are u anyways,
Me: i'm Black Star, warrior of peace and love, and u hurt my friend so in the name of the stars, i'll punish u,
Hatori: i don't think so,
she comes at me with her long nails, i run over to darien,
Me: you, take my this cat, her names luna, she belongs to serena,
thats when luna looks at me, and whispers in my ear,
Luna: how do u know that,
i turn away from darien,
Me: i had a feeling ok,
i then turn back at darien,
Me: please, take her to serena, now go,
i hand her to him and he runs off,
Me: now time to defeat u hatori,
Hatori: not on my watch, HAIR SPIKES,
her hair flys at me i dodge them, except one cut my arm,
Me: oohhh, well fine then my turn,
i jump away from her, i land on the ground, i clap my hands together and a flute comes out of my hand, i grab it with my other hand, then i put my fingers where i felt i had to put them, then i start to play, and as i played a beam of light shoot out of the middle of the flute and hit the monster, i kept playing until the monster screamed,
Hatora: wonderful,
then it dissapeared, then soon some other people came, 5 girls, two of them where blonde, one of them had blue hair, another had brown, and another had dark dark dark red hair, they seemed familar to me,
One of the blonde haired girls: hi my names sailor moon, and who are u,
Me: i'm someone,
Other blondy: are u our friend or are enemy,
Me: wut ever u think is right,
Sailor moon: sailor venuse u shouldn't jump to that question so early,
Dark red haired girl: well we need to know so that no one gets hurt dumby,
Sailor moon: sailor mercury sailor mars is being mean to me,
i look at the blue haired girl, she was typing something in her computer, i guessed that she must be sailor mercury,
Sailor Mercury: i can't get a good reading on her,
Brown haired girl: then i guess shes and enemy,
Sailor Moon: we don't know that yet sailor jupitor, stop jumping to wut u think she is,
Me: if u must know, my names sailor Black Star,
Sailor Moon: so ur a sailor scout to,
she runs over to me but then sailor mars yells to her to stop,
Sailor Mars: stop sailor moon, even though shes a scout doesn't mean shes good,
Me: this is boring me, u girls can think about it later, i'm outa here,
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After class i walked home with rei and lita, i reached my door and opened it then stopped,
Me: can u guys please leave me alone for now,
i turn back at them and they nod there heads, then i say to my self,
Me: at least they trust me, unlike they do for sarena,
i laugh to my self and then go up stairs and sit at my desk on my chair, i slump on my desk and stare at the picture of me and seiya when we where at the zoo that one day, i smiled at it and then started to cry,
Me: y does this always happen to me,
then it starts to rain, i look out my window, then i get up from my chair and walk outside without a jacket, it felt good to feel the rain on my skin, to feel free running threw the rain, i felt like screaming but i decided not to, but instead i decided to sing a melody [the melody that plays in that one star shaped neckilace that sailor moon carrys with her in sailor moon S], when i was done singing the melody i was soaked to the bone, my uniform was drenched, but i didn't care, i stand on the sidewalk as the rain still pours, i look down at my wet clothes, i start to cry but u can't tell because of the rain, thats when i start to head home, when i got home i take a shower and put my clothes in the dryer, then i go to sleep and keep dreaming about tomorrow an wut might happen at the concert, i keep tossing and turning until i finally get to sleep.
>>FF>>
The next morning i woke up to the sun shining in my face, [This happens a couple of times in the story. The sun seems to always be in her face when she wakes up.]
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I open my eyes to find that i have wings and my clothes had changed into a white dress, i spinned around a couple of times, then i look down to find chibi chibi asleep, i reach down to her and pick her up,
Me: thank u chibi chibi, or should i say, light of hope,
i hear star fighter gasp then i look over at her, she was stareing at me, i smiled and laugh lightly, thats when i heared galaxia scream, i turned to face her, her face was boiling red, so then i ran over to star fighter and handed her the sleeping chibi chibi,
Me: plz star fighter, star maker, and star healer, take perfect care of chibi chibi, don't let anything happen to her,
Star Fighter: yes, we understand,
she nods her head and then smiles, i smile back at her, then turn back to galaxia and give her a stern look,
Galaxia: no, u weren't supposed to awaken, u where supposed to be dead, oh well, this will just take longer then i thought it would have,
Me: plz galaxia, give me back my friends,
i soften my look at her, she just smirks,
Galaxia: never, i'm going to have all the star seeds in the univers,
Me: i'm not going to let u do that galaxia,
thats when she comes at me with her sword, i dodge it, and fly upward, she just smirks, then she starts to change, she turns all black,
Me: oh no, the darkness is taking over her body completly,
she grows wings and flys up to me with her sword but i fly away,
thats when i hear a voice in my head,
Voice: take ur sword princess angilena, its the only way to defeat galaxia,
Me: no, i don't want to hurt her,
i argue back in my head,
Voice: but u must, in order to get ur friends star seeds u must us ur sword,
Me: no, i don't want to hurt her,
i say back to the voice in my head, then she comes at me again, i fall but then stop before i hit the ground, then i clap my hands together and bring out my flute, i start to play a sweet melody and galaxia just stands there,
--another dimention--
in a vally of flowers there is a women, she has blonde and red hair and is wearing a white gown, she looks up to the sky and stares at the sky,
Girl: light of hope, help princess angilena, help defeat galaxia,
--back to princess angilena's pov--
I closed my eyes and saw a women that had blonde and red hair, she was very pretty, i saw her reach out her arm to the sky, thats when i new wut i had to do, i stared up at galaxia who was prepareing to come down on me,
Me: plz galaxia, stop this, don't let the evil take over ur body, i know u still have good in u,
Galaxia: ha, i have no good in me, i'm all evil,
Me: i don't belive that,
thats when she comes down on me, i dodge again and go higher up, i look down on her and see that she reminds me of the women, i knew she still had good in her,
My Thoughts: its all the evils fault, its corrupted her mind and body, but i'll help her,
then i reach out my hand, she just stares at me, then i see her start to reach up her hand,
Galaxia: wut is this, y is my arm reaching towards urs,
Me: ur still good, now let me help u galaxia,
she just stares at me, i stare into her eyes and then fly down towards her, she put up her sword and stuke it threw my stomach, i flinched in pain as i heard star fighter and the other starlights scream my name,
Starlights: PRINCESS ANGILENA,
Star Fighter: ANGEL,
i look over at them and give them a weak smile, then i look back at galaxia who is stareing at me wide eyed, the sword still in me with her hand still on the handel, then i put up my hand and grab hers as it shakes, then she starts to glow, all the evil goes away as a light covers her, i then open my eyes to see the women,
Women: thank u Angel, for destroying the evil and saving everyone,
i still clutch my stomach,
Women: good luck, princess angilena,
she smiles at me, then i open my eyes, and slowly start to fly back down, i land on the floor and just lay there, then i hear the starlights crowd around me,
Star Fighter: angel, hang in there, ur going to be ok,
Star Healer: u did it, u saved everyone,
Star Maker: come on, u can pull threw, just hold on,
i look up at them and smile weakly,
Me: i'm glad ur all ok,
then i see chibi chibi walk up to me with tears in her eyes,
Chibi Chibi: chibi chibi,
she puts her hands on my stomach, i flinch but then put my hand on my stomach, my wound had healed, i opened my eyes and put my hand on my stomach, i then look up at star fighter and rape my arms around her neck, then i quickly let go and look down at chibi chibi,
Me: thank u, light of hope,
Title: When Blossems Bloom and When Blossems Bloom The Second Stage (sic)
Writer: Firestarter11 (I’ve heard that quote you made up several times before, hon.)
Canon: Dubbed anime
Rating: 4
Name: You/Angel
Senshi Title: Sailor Black Star
Species: Puella angstia
Hair: Blue, straight, shoulder length, black in her senshi form.
Eyes: Red, light purple in her senshi form.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Senshi Outfit: Pictures by Unknown. Not described in the story.
Possessions: A circular transformation brooch with a heart shaped middle and diamond in the center, a flute that can turn into a sword, a wand that looks exactly like the one Sakura uses in Cardcaptor Sakura, and a light blue stuffed rabbit that was given to her by Seiya.
Guardians: Star, a silver cat with a black star on her forehead.
Origin: Her parents and younger brother died in a car accident during a storm a year ago. She lives by herself while her grandmother pays for everything. She is also Princess Angilena of the Stars. What her duties are and whether or not she has a past have not been seen.
Connections to Canon: The bestest friend of all of the Inner Senshi who is in Serena’s class. She is the one who got Darien and Serena together. Seiya is her true love that nobody wants her to be with. Galaxia is obsessed with stealing her starseed because it’s the most important one in the universe (since it’s connected to everyone else’s and would cause all of them to be stolen… or something.) Chibi Chibi saves her when her starseed does get taken. She heals Galaxia instead of Sailor Moon.
Senshi Moves: Various nameless moves that involve playing her flute. One makes a beam of light shoot out of it, another makes the target fall asleep,
Star Powder Evolution: Powder comes out of the flute wand, falls on the enemy, and kills it.
Other Special Abilities: She can play the flute. She can memorize and know how to play an entire song just by glancing at the sheet music once. (She uses this to learn one of the hardest pieces that her teacher had.) She knows Luna belongs to Serena without anyone telling her. She cannot be read by Mercury’s computer.
Annoying Traits: She cries constantly.
Comments: This story has some of the longest run-on sentences I have ever seen.
The author isn’t going to update any of her stories (except for the one that involves her Naruto half-demon ninja sue) because she didn’t get enough ratings.
Oh and, to all of you who want to call troll because of the AOLspeak, keep in mind that Quizilla has absolutely no standards when it comes to spelling and grammar. (At least, none that I know of.)
Samples:
Me: wut happened to me, my hair, my clothes,
Luna: so u are black star, i new it,
???: wait where did that one girl go, u stupid girl u let that girl get away, now galaxia is going to be angry,
Me: who are u,
???: i am hatora, one of the warriors that help galaxia, the queen,
Luna: galaxia, i hardly think that she is the queen,
Hatora: shut up u weak cat,
she uses her powers to blow luna into a wall,
Me: luna,
i run to luna and pic her up in my arms,
Me: oh luna, are u ok,
Luna: i'll be fine, please black star, help the sailor scouts to find the princess,
Me: i will,
thats when i hear foot steps behind, me it was darien, he just stares at me,
Hatori: who are u anyways,
Me: i'm Black Star, warrior of peace and love, and u hurt my friend so in the name of the stars, i'll punish u,
Hatori: i don't think so,
she comes at me with her long nails, i run over to darien,
Me: you, take my this cat, her names luna, she belongs to serena,
thats when luna looks at me, and whispers in my ear,
Luna: how do u know that,
i turn away from darien,
Me: i had a feeling ok,
i then turn back at darien,
Me: please, take her to serena, now go,
i hand her to him and he runs off,
Me: now time to defeat u hatori,
Hatori: not on my watch, HAIR SPIKES,
her hair flys at me i dodge them, except one cut my arm,
Me: oohhh, well fine then my turn,
i jump away from her, i land on the ground, i clap my hands together and a flute comes out of my hand, i grab it with my other hand, then i put my fingers where i felt i had to put them, then i start to play, and as i played a beam of light shoot out of the middle of the flute and hit the monster, i kept playing until the monster screamed,
Hatora: wonderful,
then it dissapeared, then soon some other people came, 5 girls, two of them where blonde, one of them had blue hair, another had brown, and another had dark dark dark red hair, they seemed familar to me,
One of the blonde haired girls: hi my names sailor moon, and who are u,
Me: i'm someone,
Other blondy: are u our friend or are enemy,
Me: wut ever u think is right,
Sailor moon: sailor venuse u shouldn't jump to that question so early,
Dark red haired girl: well we need to know so that no one gets hurt dumby,
Sailor moon: sailor mercury sailor mars is being mean to me,
i look at the blue haired girl, she was typing something in her computer, i guessed that she must be sailor mercury,
Sailor Mercury: i can't get a good reading on her,
Brown haired girl: then i guess shes and enemy,
Sailor Moon: we don't know that yet sailor jupitor, stop jumping to wut u think she is,
Me: if u must know, my names sailor Black Star,
Sailor Moon: so ur a sailor scout to,
she runs over to me but then sailor mars yells to her to stop,
Sailor Mars: stop sailor moon, even though shes a scout doesn't mean shes good,
Me: this is boring me, u girls can think about it later, i'm outa here,
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After class i walked home with rei and lita, i reached my door and opened it then stopped,
Me: can u guys please leave me alone for now,
i turn back at them and they nod there heads, then i say to my self,
Me: at least they trust me, unlike they do for sarena,
i laugh to my self and then go up stairs and sit at my desk on my chair, i slump on my desk and stare at the picture of me and seiya when we where at the zoo that one day, i smiled at it and then started to cry,
Me: y does this always happen to me,
then it starts to rain, i look out my window, then i get up from my chair and walk outside without a jacket, it felt good to feel the rain on my skin, to feel free running threw the rain, i felt like screaming but i decided not to, but instead i decided to sing a melody [the melody that plays in that one star shaped neckilace that sailor moon carrys with her in sailor moon S], when i was done singing the melody i was soaked to the bone, my uniform was drenched, but i didn't care, i stand on the sidewalk as the rain still pours, i look down at my wet clothes, i start to cry but u can't tell because of the rain, thats when i start to head home, when i got home i take a shower and put my clothes in the dryer, then i go to sleep and keep dreaming about tomorrow an wut might happen at the concert, i keep tossing and turning until i finally get to sleep.
>>FF>>
The next morning i woke up to the sun shining in my face, [This happens a couple of times in the story. The sun seems to always be in her face when she wakes up.]
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I open my eyes to find that i have wings and my clothes had changed into a white dress, i spinned around a couple of times, then i look down to find chibi chibi asleep, i reach down to her and pick her up,
Me: thank u chibi chibi, or should i say, light of hope,
i hear star fighter gasp then i look over at her, she was stareing at me, i smiled and laugh lightly, thats when i heared galaxia scream, i turned to face her, her face was boiling red, so then i ran over to star fighter and handed her the sleeping chibi chibi,
Me: plz star fighter, star maker, and star healer, take perfect care of chibi chibi, don't let anything happen to her,
Star Fighter: yes, we understand,
she nods her head and then smiles, i smile back at her, then turn back to galaxia and give her a stern look,
Galaxia: no, u weren't supposed to awaken, u where supposed to be dead, oh well, this will just take longer then i thought it would have,
Me: plz galaxia, give me back my friends,
i soften my look at her, she just smirks,
Galaxia: never, i'm going to have all the star seeds in the univers,
Me: i'm not going to let u do that galaxia,
thats when she comes at me with her sword, i dodge it, and fly upward, she just smirks, then she starts to change, she turns all black,
Me: oh no, the darkness is taking over her body completly,
she grows wings and flys up to me with her sword but i fly away,
thats when i hear a voice in my head,
Voice: take ur sword princess angilena, its the only way to defeat galaxia,
Me: no, i don't want to hurt her,
i argue back in my head,
Voice: but u must, in order to get ur friends star seeds u must us ur sword,
Me: no, i don't want to hurt her,
i say back to the voice in my head, then she comes at me again, i fall but then stop before i hit the ground, then i clap my hands together and bring out my flute, i start to play a sweet melody and galaxia just stands there,
--another dimention--
in a vally of flowers there is a women, she has blonde and red hair and is wearing a white gown, she looks up to the sky and stares at the sky,
Girl: light of hope, help princess angilena, help defeat galaxia,
--back to princess angilena's pov--
I closed my eyes and saw a women that had blonde and red hair, she was very pretty, i saw her reach out her arm to the sky, thats when i new wut i had to do, i stared up at galaxia who was prepareing to come down on me,
Me: plz galaxia, stop this, don't let the evil take over ur body, i know u still have good in u,
Galaxia: ha, i have no good in me, i'm all evil,
Me: i don't belive that,
thats when she comes down on me, i dodge again and go higher up, i look down on her and see that she reminds me of the women, i knew she still had good in her,
My Thoughts: its all the evils fault, its corrupted her mind and body, but i'll help her,
then i reach out my hand, she just stares at me, then i see her start to reach up her hand,
Galaxia: wut is this, y is my arm reaching towards urs,
Me: ur still good, now let me help u galaxia,
she just stares at me, i stare into her eyes and then fly down towards her, she put up her sword and stuke it threw my stomach, i flinched in pain as i heard star fighter and the other starlights scream my name,
Starlights: PRINCESS ANGILENA,
Star Fighter: ANGEL,
i look over at them and give them a weak smile, then i look back at galaxia who is stareing at me wide eyed, the sword still in me with her hand still on the handel, then i put up my hand and grab hers as it shakes, then she starts to glow, all the evil goes away as a light covers her, i then open my eyes to see the women,
Women: thank u Angel, for destroying the evil and saving everyone,
i still clutch my stomach,
Women: good luck, princess angilena,
she smiles at me, then i open my eyes, and slowly start to fly back down, i land on the floor and just lay there, then i hear the starlights crowd around me,
Star Fighter: angel, hang in there, ur going to be ok,
Star Healer: u did it, u saved everyone,
Star Maker: come on, u can pull threw, just hold on,
i look up at them and smile weakly,
Me: i'm glad ur all ok,
then i see chibi chibi walk up to me with tears in her eyes,
Chibi Chibi: chibi chibi,
she puts her hands on my stomach, i flinch but then put my hand on my stomach, my wound had healed, i opened my eyes and put my hand on my stomach, i then look up at star fighter and rape my arms around her neck, then i quickly let go and look down at chibi chibi,
Me: thank u, light of hope,