The Promise (PG-13)

Oct 05, 2012 10:08

Title: The Promise
Author: shy-of-reality
Prompt: 085. She's head girl. He's head boy. They fancy each other. But, unbeknowst to her, he promised Albus that he wouldn't do anything. How long will he be able to hold it in when she's walking around their private common room in skimpy pajamas.
Summary: Rose is Scorpius’ dream girl. As her best friend he wasn’t on her ( Read more... )

author:shy-of-reality, round five, fic, rating:pg-13

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mollywheezy October 6 2012, 16:00:59 UTC
I loved how you interspersed Scorpius' thoughts with Rose's comments. LOL at "Killing Albus was back on the table." ;)

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shy_of_reality November 4 2012, 22:54:10 UTC
Thanks :)

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orkyd October 8 2012, 08:15:42 UTC
Very cute story =) I laughed out loud at a couple lines. Overall, it was an enjoyable fluffy read. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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shy_of_reality November 4 2012, 22:54:32 UTC
Thanks :)

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missdagane October 8 2012, 08:28:45 UTC
Loved it.

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shy_of_reality November 4 2012, 22:54:38 UTC
Thanks :)

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i_am_girlfriday October 9 2012, 12:42:42 UTC
This was fun and sweet!

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shy_of_reality November 4 2012, 22:54:44 UTC
Thanks :)

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drcjsnider October 13 2012, 02:02:09 UTC
My favorite section is when Scorpius is knocked off his broom cuz he's busy watching Rose. It was great to see him holding on to his promise to Al, too, even when it was hard.

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shy_of_reality November 4 2012, 23:00:17 UTC
Thanks :)

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