Can't Read My (PG)

Oct 03, 2012 09:48

Title: Can’t Read My
Author: ladielazarus
Prompt: 092. Scorpius wins a date with Rose in a game of poker with Albus. Rose is livid.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,288

Can't Read My )

round five, author:ladielazarus, fic, rating:pg

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enchantedteapot October 3 2012, 17:33:14 UTC
This line: "I’d say thank you, but then it appears that I’ve fallen prey to the belief that it’s a compliment.” made me grin in that way that only sexy, snarky couples can :D
Would love to read a companion piece/prelude to this, to see why Rose dislikes Scorpius so much. I bet that would be a fab story! Well done, MA!

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ladielazarus October 31 2012, 16:55:20 UTC
Aw. Thank you. :) I'm so glad that you liked it.

I actually have a really hard time writing stories where Rose dislikes Scorpius automatically. I always sort of figured that, with the inevitable friendship with Albus and Rose and Scorpius's mutual intelligence, they'd always be acquaintances at best.

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shiv5468 October 3 2012, 18:04:53 UTC
Nice, witty banter!

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ladielazarus October 31 2012, 16:58:29 UTC
Aw. Thank you. :)

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missdagane October 3 2012, 18:05:41 UTC
I really loved this one. It's really funny and sweet. I really love Rose reactions.

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ladielazarus October 31 2012, 16:59:00 UTC
Rose is really fun to write because, in any given situation, she can go in a Ron direction or a Hermione direction. I like playing with the dichotomy. I'm glad you like reading it. :)

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sarahyyy October 3 2012, 20:07:17 UTC
I love this! The dialogue is great and the characters are really fun to read. I pretty much just grinned the whole way through. Great job!

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ladielazarus October 31 2012, 16:59:16 UTC
I'm glad I could make you smile. :)

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laurels October 3 2012, 20:48:48 UTC
I liked this a lot! Would have loved to see it even longer because I thought Rose changed her opinion on Scorpius maybe a bit quickly, but the idea was great and the banter a really good laugh!
Good job :)

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ladielazarus October 31 2012, 16:59:49 UTC
That bothered me, as well, but I was worried about it dragging, as well. I might re-write it now that I don't have a deadline looming. :)

Thank you for reading! :)

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