Chapter 2

Nov 10, 2006 12:12

I'm going to forgo headers from now on, because we all know we're here for Jack/Sawyer, it'll be anywhere from PG-13 to NC-17, and no spoilers past S1 because that's when canon and this 'verse parted ways. Since it's NaNo and I'm trying to crank out a couple of thousand words a day, don't hold me to very high editing standards, okay ( Read more... )

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alliecat8 November 21 2006, 20:59:34 UTC
Oh, I love to hear feedback from people who have never been to the Smokies! I'm worried that I'm not doing them justice, so THANK YOU for saying you think I did.

but you get the impression it's more out of a sense of duty than because he'd actually care about looking after it.

I think that's probably true. Jack would do what he's supposed to do, while Sawyer tends to defy conventions.

how he decides that something's his rather than most people who acquire things without any kind of decision involved.

Poor Sawyer, he's been deprived of so much, while things have always come easily (and I mean that in the sense of material things) to Jack. I think Sawyer's had to decide what he wants so he can take it for himself. It's made him what he is, for good or for bad.

I'm so glad you liked the house-as-character! That's one of the things I'm enjoying the most. And it makes me giggle that Jack has a difficult relationship with the house, and kinda thinks it's out to get him. Silly Jack. ;)

Thank you for the lovely feedback! *hugs*

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