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smithnjones

[fic][backdated to Shakespeare's death]

Jul 08, 2010 00:35

Title: And so it is
Summary: I had to write this out so I know how Martha will react to the death. Yes. I stole the title from the icon, because I couldn't think of anything else to name it. It's really short so I probably didn't have to name it anything. Oh well.

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canon, fiction

Comments 6

tempered_scars July 8 2010, 06:45:16 UTC

WAUGH. *flails*

Wes, STFU and settle the eff down so I can properly review. :x

I actually really love that it's short. It packs a punch with every sentence, short and still cutting somehow.

I love this as I love all your writing but fff, it was painful to read just because I adore her character and so do many up in my head.

asdlkfas Marfaaa she's been through so much and now this. I just want to snuggle her forever. ;________;

smithnjones July 8 2010, 07:35:26 UTC

*SNUGS*

:<< Sorry, Wes. I did have a feeling that she would shut down after that, and it's nice that at least sometimes I'm right, even if her shutting down is really painful. ><

I'm really pleased that the shortness worked! keja; Zomg! :) It makes me happy as I wasn't sure that it was enough so yes.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! :> <333

thefarenough July 8 2010, 06:48:45 UTC

OUCH.

There's so much in this, and all of it makes my chest hurt. It's just painful and sharp and STRONG and amazing.

Gah.

Beautifully done. Just...damn. And also wow. OUCH.

smithnjones July 8 2010, 07:42:10 UTC

*CLINGS*

I'm sorry for the ouch, but I'm glad you thought it was beautiful and sharp and strong.

I was definitely going for sharp when I wrote it. It felt very sharp to me so yes that makes me happy. :>

Thank you for reading and reviewing, hon. *HUGS*.

neveravictim04 July 8 2010, 08:19:52 UTC

I was waiting for this ... just, as soon as I saw that post saying he was killed, my stomach actually dropped. >>

And this is just - such a perfect portrayal of that last grief, the one that finally makes you break, and all the options, and leaving you wondering what she'll do, what she'll choose, where she really is emotionally ... it's just all very effective and full of break.

The italics were very effective, too. Just ... *much flailing and breaking* It made me teary.

It's so ... lovely. Not the situation, but the way it's written. Yes. And ... sad.

:(

But well done, dear. <333

smithnjones July 9 2010, 00:38:05 UTC

*snugs* Yeah, it took me awhile to write it because I didn't-- I was afraid of what would happen when I did, but I knew I had to write it in order to play her again.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you think that it was written lovely, and I'm really happy that it's effective.

<33333 *HUGS*