...So I wanted to write a combat scene

[smiley_anon]

Right. My daily writing widget was somewhat delayed due to computer issues, but I'm back. And. Uh.

This is... technically ficwork. For a longer fic. This will be most or maybe all of a chapter for Extraordinary Voyages, a fic I'm... not very far into. It'll get worked on (clearly), though I'm probably updating Letting Go first

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[vampiress_queen]

The fun your having in Extraordinary Voyages comes through, it really does. It feels like you love writing the action and anyone reading it can't help but get caught up in it. Hell for a minute there when he's falling I swear my stomach dropped like I was on a roller coaster and I could see the ground rushing up at me.
Man I'm looking forward to whatever comes next in either story. I'm all jittery wondering if Sam's gonna wake up captured or maybe he'll get saved by Quorra- again. What will Rinzler get up to in Sam's place this time? (And Sam's "Tron" seems like it will be the catalyst. Hello unlocking memories!)

And I .... overdid my comments again. Even worse than the first time ...*facepalm*
But seeing as you didn't mind the first time hope you'll forgive this one as well. I just tend to write alot :3 If you keep your characters as true as you have been then I have no doubt that your stories will be epic. Although I do wonder if either of the ongoing stories are gonna pair Tronzler with Sam. That'd just be an added bonus considering that the direction the story's are headed are interesting enough as they are. XDD Well I hope your computer recovers and that more inspiration keeps flowing your way.

[smiley_anon]

XD Wordspewing is something we share, it seems (I wordvomit all over the fics that I like). And... yeah. Still just grinning crazily here. :)

But yeah, AUs are just... it's really fun to take the 'what if' and run with it. Especially when one small tweak can send the whole story tumbling in a new direction. Sam/Tron interaction just makes me happy all over the place. And heh, this snippet will not be the first such interaction in EV. Sam's recognition doesn't come out of nowhere, after all...

Rinzler's perspective is something I'm having a lot of fun trying to get into. As either Tron or Rinzler, he seems to enjoy combat, and showing off in combat. But at the same time, he's so utterly broken, and on some level he has to know that--whether from half-accessed memory/directives, or simply from hundreds of cycles of being unable to access his own memory and purpose. And he's never met Sam, but there are so many half-triggered connections; just being around Sam makes him twitchy.

...:D You kind of just went through all of the Hold On 'verse things that make me happy. And then some. Thanks so much; I'm glad you liked it and found those things in it.

With Letting Go, there's definitely a lot going on that's not completely clear; Sam as a PoV character results in some insight and a decent lot of obliviousness. With Rinzler's eyes, the simplest explanation is 'he's used to the helmet'. The more complicated version relates to how he adapted/was recoded in grid, and how the laser worked while translating that to user-world states. So yeah, pretty much just does not want light around now.

:D Myeah. Thanks so much for reading, enjoying, and expressing your enjoyment so thoroughly. Glad you're liking what I'm writing, and it's happifying to hear that my writing style's improving as I depict these guys. This fandom's definitely got me writing more than I've ever ficced before, and I doubt I'll be stopping anytime soon.