Bank Shot: Emotional Rescue (LoveFest Entry # 4)
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: **** for graphic sex. Kinks abound: toys, public sex, slight bdsm elements and two-lines of a three-some. Warning: some people's boundaries will get pushed.
Summary: Jack and Ennis have had close encounters in a bank vault, at the library and are now at a sex club. Wonder what will happen in that sex club? Could it be... ( Read more... )
I only woke up to read this, sweetie. I was reading the whole time with wide open eyes, drooling and SHOCKED, heart racing.This is unbelievably hot. 6:30 am and I’ve already read this 3 times!!! This is the kind of thing I need to start my day!! Can I have more of this every morning?
This chapter is a major turn on, and I just found out that I must be a real perv cause I LOVE the whole dance floor scene. Well I’m sure I’d never do that, but imagine that with Ennis and Jack…..well, you know, I was mesmerized here trying to focus and don’t pass out.
Jack leaned into Ennis, shamelessly rubbing his ass along Ennis’s crotch. Ennis didn’t seem to mind, one hand on Jack’s hip holding him in place, and the other hand reaching under Jack’s shirt and lifting it up to expose his chest. The shy Ennis that greeted Jack at the door was replaced by the predator, hungry for his prize.
“God, look at you,”
“You like that, Jack? Want me to do you like that in front of all these people?” Ennis murmured. “You wearing my ring? Want to feel it on you.”
Ennis must have sensed Jack’s distress because he gave Jack a soothing kiss on his shoulder, followed by a quick bite.
Jack couldn’t get his pants off fast enough, burning with the need to get Ennis inside him. He knew he should be thankful that Ennis brought them back to a dimly lit area, but he was so far gone he would’ve probably gone down on all fours right there in the middle of the dance floor.
“Fuck yes, now you, I want you,” Jack whimpered.
“Here I am, baby, here,” Ennis murmured as he pushed his cock into Jack’s already lubed and stretched passage.
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Too late. I’m on the floor. I think I’m not gonna be able to work now!!! And it's your fault.
As I said at the forum I can read all that kinky stuff cause I know that you always write hotness and sex with huge doses of sweetness and love; that’s why I love your writing, honey. And this bit really stole my heart.
He traced Ennis’s lips with his finger. “You make me feel….”
Jack realized with sudden emotion what word he wanted to use. All his life he’d been searching for someone who could make him feel this way. All his life this thing had eluded him for he'd never found it in his childhood home or even within the friendship he treasured. For what it took for him to gain it was his own trust and surrender. And a man willing to be the one. The one to set things right. The one to take charge. The one to offer protection and shelter and a life built for two.
So he reached up and took Ennis’s face in his hands and looked deep in Ennis's eyes when he said, “Ennis, you make me feel... safe.”
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Awww.**sigh** I love your sweet sweet sweet Jack. And this damn sexy Ennis. I love that Ennis want to quit his dom role to make a place for Jack into his life, and he doesn’t want to share; I love that. I don’t want to share neither.
What else can I say? You know how I feel. I was dying to read it and this has been beyond all the wonderful sexy hot things I’ve imagined.
Are you going to visit this universe some more times in the future? PLEASEEEEE!!! I think you write the hottest boys in the world; fist maple syrup boys and now public places boys. Yes sir, me like that!! Yummy.
I was amazed with the Christmas collaboration, but honey, this lovefest has made me adore your work even so much more. I even adore the titles!!! They are great. I really wish I had written this story. Thank you so much Em for make me forget the world outside one more time.
Time to hit the shower. I need it!!!
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Well I saw your comments on the thread and I know you were really anticipating this chapter. I was so worried you would be disappointed. But, thank goodness, your innate pervyness took over and you enjoyed it. Whew! I just breathed a sigh of relief.
I'm all about fun and romance mixed with the sex. I just can't sustain general angst, even though I love it in other people's writing. Love your comments,as always, Tammy. One of the biggest pay-offs I receive after posting something, is seeing your comment on my LJ. Thanks again.
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