Bank Shot: Overdue Item (Love Fest Entry # 2)
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys.
Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries.
Dedication: To
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Rating: **** for public sex, slight kink and toys.
Summary: Jack goes to meet Ennis at the library. Will they study quietly or make all sorts of noise? This is Part 2 of 3 LoveFest entries.
Dedication: To
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I love this story cause the hotness but above all the sweetness and the humour!! This is brilliant, and what I love the most this time is the precious words and images you used in some parts.
Marvelous exchanges between Sam and Jack, funny and touching. Sam is a very good man. What a nice friendship they have. I like that so much. Also I love this soooooooo sweet Jack, dreamer and nervous.
It took him an hour to figure out which pair of jeans (button-down, definitely) and what T-shirt (white, hides certain splatters really well) and how many condoms to put in his pocket (three, oh please please please).
He is adorable, isn’t he?
And WATER WALKING JESUS!!! I need a defibrillator right now!!!! The hottest sex I’ve ever read!!! Indescribable!!! Those close eyes, that sexy note, those fingers, that mouth and, sweet Jesus have mercy, THAT DILDO!!!! I’m going to need a rehabilitation to learn how to breathe again!!! And, oh, the sweet funny cute Jack’s inner thoughts. I love this public sex and above all those toys!!! You don’t know what you’re doing to me with this story Em!!! I’m smiling like a idiot right know!!
he felt one of the hands leave him briefly and he heard the unmistakable click of a flip top being opened and closed. Lube
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He didn’t know which way to thrust. Towards the hungry mouth milking him, or backwards to the fingers that filled him. Either way sent explosions to his brain.
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A dildo, God help me.
He couldn’t stop it -- he grunted. A deep, needy sound that sounded pitiful even to his own ears. Immediately the mouth and the dildo were gone. No, no, no, oh f***. He gritted his teeth and clenched his fists, swallowing his moans. I'll be quiet, I want you, please, I need, I need….
The mouth came back and so did the dildo. Harder and hotter and faster than ever. Thank you, oh yes, thank you. The dildo was going deep now, pushing his c*ck into the back of Ennis’s throat with each thrust. Close, so close, please, oh please, almost, oh f***, more, more, yes, oh God, yes, yes!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!
And this Ennis!!!! DED!!! So sexy and mysterious and tender and and and ….. I can hear his deep voice saying this:
His head came up and instantly he was engulfed in warm arms, his lips taken in a deep kiss that tasted of him. His hands snaked out around Ennis’s waist, pulling Ennis closer as he knelt beside Jack.
“You’re so amazing,” Ennis whispered between soft fluttery kisses. “I was supposed to leave right after. Melt into the shadows after giving you this.”
Ennis put another envelope on the desk. Jack’s hands were busy kneading Ennis’s back; he figured he’d look in the envelope later.
“But,” Ennis continued, “I couldn’t go without telling you…without saying…”
Jack held his breath when he saw what was in Ennis’s eyes. Something soft and tender and infinitely precious.
“You matter to me,” Ennis said, voice clogged with emotion. “Thank you for trusting me.” Ennis leaned forward and gave him another searing kiss before standing up.
Beautiful!!! So sweet!!! This is, like you said, "something soft and tender and infinitely precious". I love those words!!!
And this is so funny. I can see Sam face here:
“Well from the look of you, boy, and the sounds I heard, I think the fucked one is you.”
“Naw,” Jack said smugly. “He used a dildo.” Sam looked like Wile E. Coyote right after an anvil dropped on his head. “Now will you make yourself useful and help me up? I might have some trouble walking out of here. Well, walking, period.”
Awwww. **sigh**
“Not for long, my man. It’s gonna be Jack Twist del Mar by this time next year. Mark my words.”
And the ending, what an ending. I’m dying here, seriously, this Ennis is gonna kill me. TOYS? INSIDE AND OUT? Well, I don’t even remember my name anymore!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH EM!!!! You made my day!!!
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THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS!!!
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