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Bedspacer (3/3)

May 26, 2010 18:52

Title: Bedspacer (3/3)
Author: smexplicit
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC 17
Genre: Smut
Length: 3/3
Summary: Jaejoong gets a new roomie.

( You look so sexy pleasuring yourself like that. )

length: chaptered, genre: smut, fic: bedspacer, rating: nc-17

Comments 54

dilovesyunjae May 26 2010, 11:52:00 UTC

im choking on my drool!! DAMN YOU for making this too hot... *is coughing and rolling on floor*

dilovesyunjae May 26 2010, 11:56:33 UTC

and i was not even halfway through!

aww bb, hope your hands heal soon. take care!

smexplicit May 26 2010, 12:58:04 UTC

ooh! I'm soo glad you like it!
and thanks, my hand's getting better.

*mops drool off the floor*

jlie_ly May 26 2010, 11:57:50 UTC

aw~ be careful and take care of yourself ><

this is rare to see Yunho fucked and got fucked at once XD

you're good for a first timer XD

smexplicit May 26 2010, 13:03:31 UTC

I was trying to look for something like this but couldn't find any so I decided write my own. :D
Thanks for reading! <3

kattan69 May 26 2010, 12:29:08 UTC

HOT..KINKY..HOT..KINKY...*fanning myself and switching the aircon on full blast*.

This is the first time I read with Yunho having a vibrator stuck in his ass while fucking Jae....and I like it...the idea of sharing and experiencing equally...^-^

Pls do continue for more...thanks!

smexplicit May 26 2010, 13:13:10 UTC

ooh yes exactly, 'sharing and experiencing equally'. I was a bit hesitant to include the vibrator thing at first cause I wasn't sure if YunJae will work that way. I'm so happy you like the idea. :) THANKS!!

Bedspacer (3/3) rennonyanyan May 26 2010, 12:44:01 UTC

Double pleasure for Yunho. Oh I mean, YunHOT. LOL
it's good for first timer like you :D but I thought when Yunho finally come, you kinda lose your kick. The after-sex state should be describing how hot the sex they just had. No. You're not fail. Just need some improvement ^^

sorry for being too criticized. But keep up your good work :)

Re: Bedspacer (3/3) smexplicit May 26 2010, 12:56:54 UTC

Thanks, I appreciate your comment. I see what you mean. last part felt kinda rushed. I guess I lost my touch after pouring all my energy on the smex part. LOL THANKS AGAIN! hope I can do better next time. :)

bexy31 May 26 2010, 12:57:17 UTC

Oh my God that was so hot O¬O Seriously... Your smut was awesome!! XD You should right more~ And Bedspacer was such a fantastic idea and came out so wonderfully!! ^_^ It most certainly worked XD
Gah, that was just so amazing!! *¬* Yunjae are so hot...

I'm sorry about your hand :( That sounds painful and horrible >.< I hope it gets better soon!!

Thank you so so much for writing/sharing this!! ^_^ I very much enjoyed it! XD

smexplicit May 26 2010, 13:19:49 UTC

that's really nice of you. sniff. I could cry right now! getting comments like this on my first yunjae work is overwhelming. oh, even my hand suddenly felt better. you're a miracle worker. LOL thank you so much!

bexy31 May 27 2010, 18:55:30 UTC

Yaaaaay, a pdf version!! ^_^ *downloads* Thank you so much!! XD

I never realised how much the Sensitive Pornograph boys look like Yunjae! :O *dabs nosebleed* And the shots of them really did fit so well, ha ha. How wonderful~ ^_^
However, as I have the DVD am okay with just reading the smut, I shall not be asking to download the images ^_^ Thank you though!! XD

And oh my God, I've just realised that I wrote the wrong "write/right" in my comment -///-" Sorry... I blame it on exam stress ^_^"

I can't wait to read more of your Yunjae smut if/when you do more!! ^_^ Thank you again!! :D