Dive : prologue

[smellyleaf]

Title: Dive : prologue
Pairing: MPhelps/RLochte;
Fandom: RPF
Rating: pg-13
Warnings: Real person fiction; Real person slash; Olympic glory that doesn't involve medals
Summary: Cityville High School, home of the Gators, is located in Cityville, Michigan and has an approximate student population of 1,543.

CHS is just like any other high school. The

Comments

yowza

[calla_comet]

to repeat... yowza. i'm squealing in a most unattractive manner right now because i'm so happy with this story. i love a good AU (which i think is actually quite difficult to write) and this is way better than merely "good". it is like multiple gold medals good. =)

and since i'm finally commenting, i want to thank you for posting so frequently and for writing happy stories (for the most part). i've read all your MP/RL stories but i'm so lame i haven't at all commented until now. my apologies. "five by five" has got to be one of my favorites of all times, in any 'verse, but a lot of your stories are in my memories section because i've enjoyed everything i've read. so thank you and keep on writing.

Re: yowza

[smellyleaf]

I have wanted to write this story for quite some time, hahaha. Purposefully stereotypical high school story is purposefully stereotypical.

This is the most amazing comment ever. I'm so glad you popped up to say something, because I love to get the feedback of the people that actually watch the community or are members, but it seems those people usually give the LEAST feedback, even though I put member priorities above everyone else's. You don't need to be sorry though, I'm just happy to know that you enjoy my writing, no matter if you have commented in the past or not.

Five by Five is one of my favorites, too, but I think Summer bumped it out of place the other day (I don't know why I like that one so much, hahaha, just do). And, thank you! It's a huge compliment to know I'm in your memories! ♥

If you have a request or anything, leave it here. My next entry is going to be my 100th post, so that will be something special, but I'll bump you up the request list if you have one. :)

Re: yowza

[calla_comet]

i adore purposefully stereotypical high school stories! haha. partly because i'm old enough that i remember high school with nostalgia, even the crap parts, and partly because i grew up in the 80s, the heyday of high school movies. (i'm almost embarrassed to say i once cut school to go see "visionquest".) maybe you have mad psychic skills as well as mad writing skills because this story (depending on where it goes from the prologue) actually fulfills a request i've been pondering: a story in which MP knows he is gay and isn't acting like a tool. (it just seems like there are lot more stories where MP is the jerk in the relationship, although i'm not sure why.) super cool, eh?

Re: yowza

[smellyleaf]

Yeah, I've written/am writing a story where Michael is the jerk. But that was the request, so. I have an excuse! hahaha

Yeah, I'm sooooo cool. As you can plainly see.

[blacksoul89]

I really like this! It's something different and I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes!

By the way, this would make an awesome group RP if you know anyone that's interested...

[smellyleaf]

IF YOU ARE OFFERING TO RP PHLOCHTE WITH ME
WE MAY JUST HAVE TO GET MARRIED.

[blacksoul89]

OH MY GOD I'LL GO BUY MY DRESS RIGHT NOW FO SHO.

[smellyleaf]

SERIOUSLY
SERIOUSLY?

I have been looking for someone to RP Phlochte with for like, a million years because I will play Michael or Ryan with equal enthusiasm, but I'm too much of a loser to actually ask around.

*teehee*

[annadraper]

I might have spent most of the day refreshing my flist in hopes that one of your fics would show up on it and then - finally - rubbing my hands together gleefully when this appeard before heating up some left over pizza so I could settle down and devour it (the pizza AND the story).

Maybe.

I mean, it's not like I'd be a total loser even if I *DID* do something like that.

[smellyleaf]

Well, I'll have some new stuff up pretty soon because this is my 99th entry! Meaning the big one-oh-oh is coming up, and I have to do something special for that!

And then of course, there's The Difference Between Right and Wrong, which has gone a couple days without an update, and this new series, which isn't even into Chapter One yet.

And, lololol, I love that you imply that you did that. I feel special.

[smellyleaf]

I may not be able to cram this plot into a week-long thing, but I'll think of something to do for you. :DDD ♥

And, yay, thanks.

[smellyleaf]

I am a writing robot. I post like, 40 times a day sometimes. Only reason I haven't lately is because AHHH, WEDDING PLANNER = NAZI WARLORD, AHHHH.

I SPENT SIX HOURS TODAY LOOKING AT PLATES!!!!

[agape_eternal]

Ah yes, the happiness that is a true rarity when you read a REALLY REALLY good fic.

I am SO glad you decided to write it, seriously.

[smellyleaf]

:DDD

[agape_eternal]

I can't wait for more, seriously