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If I Held My Breath 2/2

Feb 07, 2011 13:21

Title: If I Held My Breath
Chapter: 2/2
Warning: R for language, I suppose.
Character: Tyler/Caroline (future fic)
Summary: She thinks it'd be more appropriate if the place were a ghost town.
Word Count: 12,000 (total)
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( It feels good to see him like this, less angry and kind of flirting with her. )

character: tyler lockwood, character: caroline forbes, fanfic: tyler/caroline

Comments 20

txgirl0302 February 7 2011, 20:12:34 UTC

Oh I LOVED this! Every. Single. Word. They are so end game it is not even funny. Wonderful story sweetie. You are my favorite T/C fanfic writer. :)

Paris. I love it.

fairytalescenes February 7 2011, 20:33:29 UTC

Awe! I really needed this after how the last episode ended! I actually love that they're getting some good drama and the actress that plays Caroline was amazing in the last episode... but it still made me mopey!

You are amazing. You write this couple and Puckleberry better than anyone - and I adore you for it! <3

dela26 February 7 2011, 21:07:29 UTC

I just love this story, you've really captured the complicated, sad dynamic between the Caroline and Tyler. And appreciated the Damon - Caroline friendship in this fic too!

silviakundera February 7 2011, 21:30:07 UTC

Wow, it's like you knew exactly the Caroline story fandom needed after 2x13. This is, like, flawless. Spectacular characterization and writing.

iluvaqt February 7 2011, 22:34:28 UTC

I'm sad that almost everyone died but it's great for angst and character development. Awesome characterizations and hot smut.