The Sun Is Burning In The Sky [2/2]

[smc_27]

Title: The Sun Is Burning In The Sky
Chapter: 2/2
Warning: Hard R/Borderline NC-17-ish. Fictable prompt #48 - Summer (Same 'verse as Hazy Shade of Winter, but you can read this one without reading that one if you're lazy like me.)
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: It's summer and they're young, and it's not like it's unhealthy to have a regular

Comments

[smc_27]

Thanks so much for the comment. So happy you liked it.

[urkonstantine23]

I love love love this. I honestly could picture them being friends with benefits or having a sexual relationship that turns into a relationship. I think it just fits with them.

I love the progression you show their relationship going through as the story continues, and I'm really glad we got a follow up to Hazy Days of Winter where they're actually together and he's less of a dick. This was perfect!

:)

[smc_27]

Thannnnk youuuu. I had a lot of fun writing this verse. I like it when there's a gradual progression and Puck grew up a little bit. :)

[ellashy]

so so so amazing... i love how you've written them in this, more mature and totally cute together, amazing cute and of course hot... way hot but the sweet thing is just too adorable.

[smc_27]

Thanks so much! I really liked writing them in this 'verse. :)

[storywriter84]

Absolutely loved this story! I love they way that you write Noah. I feel that it's spot on to what the show does. (Also, you let us get in his head more, which I appreciate.) Wonderful!

[smc_27]

Thanks so much! I think Puck and I share a brain. ;)

[katertots_78]

Squee!

You know how much I love this, bb, seeing as I read it all along the way, but the ending is terrific. Their gradual progression felt totally natural and I think feelings would just kind of sneak up on both of them. Words cannot express how much I love the fact that Puck brought it up first. WIN!

The ending was perfect and Rachel realizing they weren't just a summer couple anymore.

Love this, love you. ♥

[smc_27]

Thanks, bb! Glad you liked the finished product. And yeah, I think when Puck realizes what he wants, he's not going to wait around for it to be brought up, he's just going to spit it out. I kinda want to write more of this 'verse....