All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie

Jul 29, 2010 16:08

Title:  All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: PG. Fictable prompt #35 - Candle
Character: Rachel, Rachel/Puck
Summary: He came in through her window often enough. Once every few weeks. Always late at night, always alone, sometimes drunk.
Word Count: 10,150
Disclaimer: Don't own.

She'd always gotten by just fine without any friends at all. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, fanfic: rachel, fictable

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kellou24 July 29 2010, 20:51:24 UTC
This is so beautiful!

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:51:41 UTC
Thank you so much.

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megan_yates July 29 2010, 21:14:48 UTC
*sigh*...that was stunning. Oh the angst! Amazing, amazing, amazing!!! I adored this story - it was incredible. I am so thankful that you shared this with us :-)

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:52:18 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad people love the angst as much as I do. So happy you enjoyed this.

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nade2008 July 29 2010, 21:23:42 UTC
Loved the progression of this piece. Just enough squeeworthy moments and angst! ;)

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:52:43 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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thebigdisaster July 29 2010, 21:28:39 UTC
I love it. This brought me great joy! Thank you.

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:54:00 UTC
Thank you for commenting!

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katertots_78 July 29 2010, 22:54:39 UTC
Ooh! This was terrific, bb! The angst was amazing without being so OTT I wanted to slit my wrists. Ha. I loved the whole thing, but my very favorite part was
"Look, how many times do I have to tell you I miss you before you start believing it?"

"I don't know," she said quietly, looking to her lap. "How many times do I have to ask you to leave before you realize you want to stay?"

I can't really explain why I love that exchange so much, but it's just amazing.

♥ u.

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:58:01 UTC
Thaaank youuuu. I'm glad you liked that part. I really loved it, too. Puck would be like, "wtf? can I hang out with you or not?" and that would kind of answer her question.

♥ u 2.

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