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Dominated Hand [2/?]

May 19, 2010 10:14

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 2/?
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave."
Word Count: 4,150
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( Rachel in a bikini cleaning his truck? He's pretty much a genius. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, dominated hand

Comments 21

lunamystik May 19 2010, 17:48:38 UTC

Ooh, the (sexual) tension is already starting to build!

Loved this: It's like he's seen the light. And the light is super hot.

I'm kind of dreading (not really) what Puck is going to have her do in a school environment.

smc_27 May 20 2010, 05:20:58 UTC

You can expect the tension to build and build and then build some more.

See, the thing with Puck is that he, you know, doesn't hate her or anything. He's not actually going to have her do anything that bad. But then again, I'm just finishing up writing Wednesday, so that could change! :P

Thanks for commenting!

countrygirl_914 May 19 2010, 17:50:35 UTC

Oh, they're both so screwed, and they don't even know it. :D

smc_27 May 20 2010, 05:23:19 UTC

Very, very true. :P

Thanks!

mvp May 19 2010, 18:40:40 UTC

Great story I love everything about it cant wait to read what happens next

p.s i just realized all my comments look the same! I need a course on giving witty reviews jaja

smc_27 May 20 2010, 05:24:08 UTC

Thanks!! And there's nothing wrong with your comments! I've come to realize that all my replies are the same, too. :P It's okay!

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smc_27 May 20 2010, 05:25:08 UTC

Glad you like it! It's only going to get hotter. ;)

Thanks for commenting!

kimmy_77 May 19 2010, 21:04:18 UTC

You really get a bunch of gold stars for writing sexual tension between these two. I mean you own that shit!

Sweaty Puck, dripping Rachel. It's almost to much yumminess.

And homeboy totally should have told her thank you. He can be a badass and slightly gentlemanly. ;)

Seriously this is made of win cause there is just no telling what he's going to have her do. And if they wind up naked, sweaty and dripping then we all win. :D

Fantastic chapter as always!

smc_27 May 20 2010, 05:27:52 UTC

I love gold stars. And sexual tension might be my favourite thing to write. It's fun!

Sweaty Puck....

....

Oh. I got distracted. Sorry.

He's a jackass for not thanking her, I know. But hey, he can't be all awesome right away.

Thanks for commenting!