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smc_27

Back To Good

May 08, 2010 20:11

Title: Back To Good
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: Post-Bad Reputation. Minor spoilers for Laryngitis (the sneak peek.) Puck's POV, so watch out for his language and dirty mind. (You know you love it.)
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: "I have generously decided to help you become a better person."
Word Count: 7,312
Disclaimer: Don't own Glee.

( She just called him a man. That's kind of awesome. And a little hot. )

fanfic: puck/rachel

Comments 29

jlz1 May 9 2010, 03:47:21 UTC

That was made of awesome! I was going to point out all the lines I liked but I'd be essentially repeating the story.

Favourite scene... I think it would have to be the 'hawk scene - how I would love to see that play out!

Thanks for sharing another fic with us! How you manage to write so much and consistently well, amazes me! Can't wait to see what you put out next!

Thanks :)

smc_27 May 9 2010, 23:29:55 UTC

Thank you! I so want Rachel to be the one to shave the 'hawk, but i really don't see that happening, sadly. I would pay money to see it. Instead, I'll just write it and pretend it happened this way :P

Glad you liked this! :)

berlian_star May 9 2010, 04:11:05 UTC

Sweet story:) always love how determine Rachel is and Puck can't resist her;) and the idea how Puck changes for goog but still is the same boy he is:)

smc_27 May 9 2010, 23:31:23 UTC

Thank you! Honestly, I don't want Puck to change too much at all. I love him the way he is, but I feel like if he could just quit the really stupid things he does, he'd be perfect. And what better reason than because Rachel asked? :P

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smc_27 May 9 2010, 23:33:13 UTC

I would write for the show in a heartbeat!!! Who do we have to call to make this happen?

I don't really see him as a douche either. He's a 16 yr old boy. He's probably (seriously) the most realistic character on the show, if you really think about it. I just feel like Rachel would be all "Um, can you please stop beating people up and setting things on fire? Okay, thanks." You know? And he'd be all, "What's in it for me?" and it'd all even out. :P

Thanks for commenting!

druidspell May 9 2010, 05:03:26 UTC

This seriously made my night :D

smc_27 May 9 2010, 23:33:40 UTC

Great! Thanks for commenting!

iheartpuck May 9 2010, 08:12:37 UTC

This was awesome, no surprises there everyhting yo write is amazing. I loved Puck in this: "Damn his mind for being a permanent resident of the gutter." I would not want him any other way and besides he is so hot he takes us there with him. Thank you for the lovely story.

smc_27 May 9 2010, 23:35:28 UTC

Thank you! Honestly, I don't want him changing too much. I love him just the way he is. And I think Rachel likes him that way too.

Gutter mind and all. :P