Characters: Louie and his students What: Cooking class! They cook breakfast dishes today! Where: Cooking class's classroom When: Monday, August 3rd Rating: PG, probably.
Re: Taste testing, grading, and the works!king_of_bugsAugust 4 2009, 01:39:36 UTC
*Louie simply nodded and prepared to dive his fork in there... when he noticed the ketchup lettering. That was... certainly something, he gave it that. Unique, too. He took a bite and after a moment of chewing, he gave his verdict.*
The taste is quite good... but I think you might have put a bit too much into it. It could use a little less... but it is alright. Presentation is wonderful and quite unique. Execution needs work, but is good enough, as well as timing.
Re: Taste testing, grading, and the works!king_of_bugsAugust 4 2009, 19:46:34 UTC
*Louie takes a bite of it. Why, it's so good that he'll have another. And another. And another.
... Okay no he has to give the grade, doesn't he? Well, here he is, doing so!*
Oh! Well... everything... everything is excellent. The bread variety is very unique. The taste and presentation are lovely... and so is the execution and timing.
Re: Taste testing, grading, and the works!king_of_bugsAugust 4 2009, 21:57:50 UTC
*Louie takes a bite, immediately greeted by a pleasant flavor. Good old classic french toast!*
Ah... the taste is delicious. Very classic. The timing and presentation are great. However... execution could be a little worked on because of the eggs. That... can be practiced.
Re: Taste testing, grading, and the works!king_of_bugsAugust 6 2009, 00:32:30 UTC
*Louie took a bite and... mmm, mmm, MMM! Wow. He'll take another few bites before he judges, okay.*
Mm, mmph... fs if grfd, grrff... *swallows* Ah... I'm sorry about that. Everything is impeccable, though I must say... it needs a little less olives. It feels a bit overpowering.
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Here you go, Mr. Louie! A fried egg sandwich - perfect for a quick breakfast!
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Okay, he thinks he's got it.*
The presentation is average and the timing was nice, as well as execution. I think... the taste could be improved but it is still delicious.
You get a B.
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Great! *He grins.* Always room for improvement. *And with this, Tails has resolve to better himself at cooking. It will come in handy in the future!*
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Here, Teach'. It should be really good. It's got, like, everything.
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The taste is quite good... but I think you might have put a bit too much into it. It could use a little less... but it is alright. Presentation is wonderful and quite unique. Execution needs work, but is good enough, as well as timing.
You get an A-!
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Thanks, Mr. Louie! I'll remember the advice for... next time.
*He happily eats as much of the rest of the omelette he can stomach for the rest of the class.*
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... Okay no he has to give the grade, doesn't he? Well, here he is, doing so!*
Oh! Well... everything... everything is excellent. The bread variety is very unique. The taste and presentation are lovely... and so is the execution and timing.
A+.
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"Here ya' go. Enjoy."
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Ah... the taste is delicious. Very classic. The timing and presentation are great. However... execution could be a little worked on because of the eggs. That... can be practiced.
A-.
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How's this? Did I do alright?
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Mm, mmph... fs if grfd, grrff... *swallows* Ah... I'm sorry about that. Everything is impeccable, though I must say... it needs a little less olives. It feels a bit overpowering.
But it is wonderful. A.
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I'm glad you like it! You can have the rest, if you'd like.
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