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Jun 24, 2008 20:25

Law&Prada part 4

sorry its taken me so long to get this up...I really struggled with it and I have no idea why...but now it should run more smoothly because I think I've decided who I want the culprit to be...

Miranda knew she wasn’t thinking logically, but at the moment, she didn’t care. She stormed into the squad room and marched up to the female ( Read more... )

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rebelsom June 25 2008, 06:56:29 UTC
Finally, the highly anticipated confrontation between Miranda and Alex. You didn't disappoint. Can't wait for more.

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smartyshortie June 25 2008, 09:36:44 UTC
thanks so much!

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jintymac June 25 2008, 07:15:17 UTC
Miranda was a whirlwind in this chapter! I imagine that if something this awful happened to her family she would actually blow her top like this as opposed to her usual calm, scary manner.

Her confrontation with Alex was also really well written so I'm looking forward to reading more soon. :-)

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smartyshortie June 25 2008, 09:40:46 UTC
aw thanks!

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tarebear23 June 25 2008, 14:16:08 UTC
nicely done. i can practically slice the tension Ms. Priestly created in that scene. it is highly believable for her to lose the ice queen image when it comes to her children/family.

hmmm... now who could the culprit be? *thinks hard*

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smartyshortie June 25 2008, 18:31:17 UTC
yea she would...i must say I enjoyed putting the two Ice Queens head to head XD

It's Nigel! haha no j/k I wouldnt do that to poor Nigel XD I really hope people do like the decision I made though XD it all makes sense in my head so I hope I can translate it to the story well enough XD

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pandora_007 June 25 2008, 19:35:37 UTC
great.. not even Alex was immune to Mirandas sweet way to deal with people.. and i can picture Olivia´s face during this tennis match conversation.. lol..
cant wait for more..

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smartyshortie June 25 2008, 21:38:55 UTC
hehe thanks.

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eljay_earthgirl June 27 2008, 05:39:25 UTC
holy heck that was good. you just gave me a reason to never, ever cross paths with Miranda. ever. not even in fiction. god, this was great. can't wait for more!

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smartyshortie June 27 2008, 06:13:00 UTC
wow thanks so much!

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