"You might need this."

Mar 08, 2008 22:40

    It had been Catherine’s idea to make love right before work. Now they were both paying the price. They had fifteen minutes to be there and neither one was close to ready. They ran around, collecting clothes from a room that looked like it was hit by a tornado.         
    Catherine crawled around on the floor, looking for her other shoe. She ( Read more... )

cath/sara

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triniliyah March 9 2008, 16:49:08 UTC
AWWW that almost brought tears to my eyes! you're sooo great at writing them, i loved this 'you might need this' theme, especially the first and second one, the third broke my heart :( great writing!

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smartyshortie March 9 2008, 20:19:39 UTC
Thank you so much!

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triniliyah March 9 2008, 20:21:17 UTC
i love your writing :) keep up the great work :)

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smartyshortie March 9 2008, 20:24:30 UTC
well your comments are very much appreciated! thank you sooo much. It makes me feel good.

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halfbloodme March 9 2008, 17:06:39 UTC
That last one, so heartbreaking. All three are so well written.

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smartyshortie March 9 2008, 20:19:49 UTC
thanks!

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olli01a March 19 2008, 19:19:53 UTC
Fun, happy end and sadness. All there but I certainly like the first and second ones more.

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fish90 June 7 2008, 07:29:45 UTC
I really liked these...but the first was definitely my favourite though. Great work!

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smartyshortie June 7 2008, 15:56:38 UTC
hehe thanks!

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xfirefly9x January 12 2009, 15:18:30 UTC
Awwwww!

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smartyshortie January 12 2009, 20:26:10 UTC
XD thanks

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