small mistake
anonymous
March 25 2007, 21:24:04 UTC
Hey there :)
First of all, I want to say, I love the Human Body Series :) I'm just a lurker around here, don't even have a LJ account. But I really love your stories.
Now, you made a small mistake here. The wound was on John's right arm, not on the left. So the change started on his right arm and went from there.
I'm really enjoying the way this story is developing. Obviously there are quite a few conversion fics out there, but the majority of them seem to take place when John's practically fully bugified, none of them seem to deal with the changes as they're happening.
Except for this one :o) I'm really liking the way you're taking the time to develop the changes more fully, and especially the way you're dealing with Carson and John's feelings.
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First of all, I want to say, I love the Human Body Series :) I'm just a lurker around here, don't even have a LJ account. But I really love your stories.
Now, you made a small mistake here. The wound was on John's right arm, not on the left. So the change started on his right arm and went from there.
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Except for this one :o) I'm really liking the way you're taking the time to develop the changes more fully, and especially the way you're dealing with Carson and John's feelings.
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