Comments | smallwaldo: The Human Body: Keep Your Head Above Water, Part 3 (Irresistible)

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The Human Body: Keep Your Head Above Water, Part 3 (Irresistible)

Dec 06, 2006 19:06

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smallwaldo December 7 2006, 01:44:12 UTC

Thanks for sticking with it. :) Glad you liked it. For some reason this was 'the story that wouldn't end'. My betas would get it and go, "And, so...? You don't think that's IT, do you?" And I'd have to tack on some more... it was weird. So I'm glad the ending worked for you.

Not that everything is resolved. ;)

jamoche December 7 2006, 02:44:53 UTC

" And the idea that it was going to be ninety-one degrees centigrade didn’t make much sense at all. Fifty-one made much more sense."

33, actually. You forgot to subtract 32 first.

smallwaldo December 7 2006, 02:50:25 UTC

Argh! Thanks. Will fix.

What scares me is that you actually know *what* error I made. :) I thought 51 seemed high, but I didn't want to lose my writing groove to check the formula. :)

misty4me December 7 2006, 03:03:07 UTC

Great ending and I'm so glad it didn't feature a 'magic healing penis', though I do miss the smut. Sigh. But this was exactly right for the story.

victoriaely December 7 2006, 06:26:56 UTC

It was a nice ending :)

All the holiday talk wasn't that good for me, though, especially since it's cold here... now I'm thinking about sunbathing and the ocean and campfires ^_^

scififreak December 7 2006, 19:29:37 UTC

Aww, John/Carson just makes me feel so warm inside. And this was very sweet. Can't wait for your next fic.

nonniemous December 8 2006, 19:10:15 UTC

No, this won't cure what happened, but it's a good start. ;-) Nicely done, and sweet finish!