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CM Fic - Breaking Free

Mar 20, 2010 06:23

Title: Breaking Free
Author: smacky30
Rating: FRAO
Pairing: Prentiss/Rossi
Prompt: Petunias
Summary: Learning to love is all about letting go and breaking free. Emily learns to do just that.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: For the Spring Smutathon on cmrossiprentiss . Many thanks to mingsmommy and losingntrnslatn for all the encouragement and being the World's Greatest Betas.

( Something inside her loosens... )

criminal minds, rossi/prentiss, adult, frao, smut

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mingsmommy March 20 2010, 20:48:52 UTC

Smackyyyyyyyyyy

You just keep getting better and better!

I will leave you a longer review when I get home tonight, but this is gorgeous.

smacky30 March 21 2010, 01:02:35 UTC

You are too sweet. And this is review enough. MWAH!

mingsmommy March 23 2010, 16:27:49 UTC

Well, I'm sure it's only review enough because you knew I was LYING.

I can't believe you post this stuff. I mean, yeah, the plot's decent and the sex is hot and all, but, Emily went out for coffee? In the middle of a case? PLEASE! And why, if this absolutely ridiculous, unbelievable thing that TOTALLLY stretches my willing suspension of disbelief had to happen, WHY was it Emily who went? It couldn't be Reid or Morgan? I mean, God forbid! Of course it had to be the woman who went out for coffee.

That shows she has far less commitment to her job than her male counterparts. PLUS you put her in the subservient role of going out to get them coffee. *rolls eyes* I think you have singlehandedly set feminism back 100 years and you should be completely ashamed.

UNBELIEVABLE!

smacky30 March 23 2010, 16:39:06 UTC

I'm not sure I understand - do you mean that I personally set it back or just the story? Can you clarify?

mingsmommy March 23 2010, 16:48:39 UTC

You know why you don't understand? Because, obviously, according to your story, not only are women less attentive to their careers and all about serving men, they're obviously stupid, too.

smacky30 March 23 2010, 16:50:18 UTC

I refuse to feed your enormous ego by continuing this discussion.

P.S. You used the word obviously twice in a sentence. Trying to prove your own theory?

mingsmommy March 23 2010, 16:54:19 UTC

No, I was dummying it down so you'd understand this time.

BTW, way to keep continuing the discussion.

smacky30 March 23 2010, 18:09:39 UTC

Don't worry about me - I can keep up with your old butt any day.

mingsmommy March 23 2010, 18:16:40 UTC

Speaking of old butts, did you figure out yet who gave you the STD? Was it your husband or his girlfriend the truck stop hooker?

As for keeping up, honey, I'm already typing as slow as I can and using small words.

smacky30 March 23 2010, 18:33:29 UTC

You're only using small words because those are the only ones you know. As for my STD - sorry I forgot to warn you about that....

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