Apocalypse pt 19

[slynn6776]

Title: Apocalypse
Author: SLynn
Fandom: Heroes
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to "Fallout"
Beta By: tripp3235
Disclaimer: I’m just borrowing and will return them all when I’m done, virtually untouched.

Summary:Three years have passed since the explosion and life has drastically changed for everyone. This isn’t the world they imagined they’d be saving

Comments

[jessieflower]

Yay for Paire moments!

I also like how Peter looks for permission from D.L., as if he is Claire's father.

[slynn6776]

I think I was as anxious for the Paire moments as everyone else was! :)

[meli_64]

Aww, poor little Petrellis...

Can't wait for the next part, duh! :D

[slynn6776]

I know. I feel especially evil for killing them off. :(

[anonymous]

I like that even though you've made nathan evil and disconnected from all of the other heroes so far in this story, when we finally meet up with peter again, that connection between them is still apparent with the only real memories surfacing, besides his mother's name, being related to nathan somehow. I know he kind of, sort of remembers Claire to some extent, but still, I like the brother bond. I'm also extremely excited to see Nathan's reaction to Peter being alive. All of these terrible things he's done, turning the U.S. into a totalitarian dictatorship, imprisoning and/or killing all the heroes that turn up when he is in fact one of them, killing Isaac! (sob, is he gonna turn out to be alive too?) It's all been in the name of revenge for his brother's death and placing the blame on an entire subset of humanity, and it's all been completely the opposite of what Peter stood for and would have wanted. I feel terrible for Nathan because obviously he's cracked completely. I was so sad to find out his sons died. It sucks because I

[slynn6776]

To me, the only logical person for Peter to have any solid memories of was his brother. I know I talked to several people about this in comms (and to my long suffering beta) but I see Nathan and Peter as very yin and yang. They give one another balance. Peter's death, in my mind, would send Nathan into a tail spin and vice versa.

I don't want to give away my ending, but I do believe in redemption. And I especially believe that Peter would think his brother is redeemable.

That's it. :P

Thanks for reading!

[scullymulder123]

Peter/Claire are LOVE.

YOUR Jonah/Peter/Claire = MUCHLY LOVE.

Because Peter has no idea who the hell she is, and even less who he is and he still is comforting her; like he normally would.

And the chemistry between the whole cast is so...amazing! You've definitely got EVERYONE in character.

But David concerns me... :/

Anyway...wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job! I LVOE this story. Literally, Mel is addicted.

[slynn6776]

I'm so into the Peter/Claire thing. I didn't expect to be when I started watching the show and now I just can't stop! :P

And how I see it, Peter can lose his memories but at his core he's the same person. And he's just a naturally caring person. Which is refreshing to see in a man on television (or anywhere).

And thank you so much! You really kind of over power me with the reviews!

(but don't stop!)

:P

[scullymulder123]

Yeah, that's really how Peter is. (and your writing reflects it.)

Over power you? How so?

[slynn6776]

Because you are so nice! :)

[hikaru_daydream]

:got behind on reading fic so will express all feelings here:

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peter!!! PETER!!! :glomps you: Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!! T____T

Jonah/Peter+Claire is so much LOVE it hurts. Oh but it is a good hurt. +___+

Peeeetttteeeeerrrr~! :dance of the fangirl:

[slynn6776]

I'm glad you liked this chapter, I was actually worried it was too much. Now I'm thinking it wasn't enough. :P