part three

Dec 12, 2012 20:05

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verse: chuck: unleashed

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gigglemonster December 13 2012, 08:20:36 UTC
[wow this comment is even more just me shouting in caps than the other ones]

Not anger or sadness, but nostalgia for the day his father left, the childhood delusion that people who left would always come back to you and the memory of the last carefree smile his sister would wear for some time.
OOOOOOUUUUCCHHH

Oh Sarah

FOND
OF
THEIR
QUIRKS

OMG THIS CASEy/SARAH SCENE IS DOING THINGS TO MEE
TRUST AND BETRAYAL AND BEING WORRIED ABOUT HER AND THEY'RE SO BEAUTIFUL

He’s giving her a break. For whatever reason.

Wow dude so many Casey feelings in this, you have no idea.

because she is a goddamn spy and if she didn’t know how to put her emotions on the backburner then she wouldn’t still be alive nearly a decade after jumping into this business.
fucking amen

Mannnn Chuck realizing that this is THE REST OF HIS LIFE. That's some heavy shit. Oh Chuck.

“Something tells me that you’re better off handling this one on your own,” Bryce offers. His knuckles graze Chuck’s arm, at the elbow, and Chuck is still all about wanting time to think things through but he doesn’t move out of reach. “I’ll just be right out here, if you need me.”
G O D

ELLLIEEEEEEEEE

DEVONNNNNNN!! OH SHIT MANN! I KNEW IT WAS COMING BUT LIKE! ;alsdkjf FUCKING BOMB JUST DROPPED IN THIS FIC! ;asdjf WHERE'S ERIN? IS SHE HAVING A FIT RN? CUZ SHE WILL BE WHEN SHE READS THIS (CUZ CLEARLY I AM)

This was SO worth the wait! 'Amazing' doesn't even come close. You've set up just SOOO much fucking cool plot stuff with this episode. And the fact that you've already started the next
part has me BEYOND giddy.

You are a sorcerer my friend. This is THE BEST!

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slybrunette December 13 2012, 21:57:14 UTC
FOND OF THEIR QUIRKS = IN LOVE WITH THEM. JSYK.

Idk what happened with Casey here. I was trying to make him sympathetic so it didn't look like he did a Face Heel Turn later and then all of a sudden he's saying things and they're trying to smush their faces together while I yell at my screen TOO SOON TOO SOON. Literally.

Ninety percent of the actual decent Chuck/Bryce stuff happens by accident. Like that.

I'm reeeaaallly looking forward to Erin's thoughts re: Devon, ngl. But I had to break him again because he's easier to write when he's fucked up and not a complete chatty dudebro.

I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS. SO RELIEVED. SO JOYOUS. SO EVERTYHING LET ME LOVE YOU.

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