Comments | slybrunette: fic [chuck]: dialogue as a diagram of a play for blood {casey/sarah}

slybrunette

fic [chuck]: dialogue as a diagram of a play for blood {casey/sarah}

Nov 08, 2011 21:57

Title: Dialogue As A Diagram Of A Play For Blood
Fandom: Chuck
Characters/Pairings: Casey/Sarah
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,784
Warnings: Violence.
Author's Note: Some of this can be blamed on my television/film viewing habits of the past few days. The rest of it I choose to blame on Tumblr. I might have snagged a line of dialogue from someone's ask ( Read more... )

character: chuck: casey, character: chuck: sarah, fandom: chuck, !fic, ship: chuck: casey/sarah

Comments 26

fancynewmeghan November 9 2011, 03:09:02 UTC

So good! I love it!

slybrunette November 9 2011, 03:14:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

kolms November 9 2011, 03:14:13 UTC

Ugh, this is wonderful. Your Casey is spot on.

slybrunette November 9 2011, 03:16:08 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so :)

gigglemonster November 9 2011, 03:32:27 UTC

Ahhhhhhhh!
I could die this is so perfect! So visceral and hot and a;sldkfj.
LOVE what you did with that prompt...that Casey gave you? LOL
This line stuck out to me especially

She’s heard all of the stories there are to tell about John Casey.

And all the more subtle physical moments

Slaps an ice pack into the center of his chest, harder than absolutely necessary. He groans. Covers her hand with his before she can pull back, and holds her there

Ugh so good. And did I mention hot? BECAUSE DAMN.
ILUUUUU

slybrunette November 9 2011, 03:37:49 UTC

Of all the places that I thought I would get prompts, the actual show was not one of them. Not that I'm complaining, lol.

Thanks hun! I'm so glad you enjoyed :D

fellclutch November 9 2011, 04:27:19 UTC

(This is "babyrocket" from Tumblr, FYI).

Giiirl, this was my first introduction to your fics and your style is amazing. The line breaks were perfection. If I pointed out every line, every phrase that I loved, it would encompass the entire story. Everything about this worked and worked perfectly. Your characterization is spot-on. There is so much to say but I'm currently too amazed to formulate anything into proper critiques. Guh.

slybrunette November 9 2011, 04:32:53 UTC

Until I saw the icon (and subsequently the comment), I was like who?. Lol.

Thank you! I'm usually less with the line breaks and short sentences (not by much, though), so this is a little change of pace from my usual style but I'm super glad that you thought it worked and enjoyed it :)

sunshineali November 9 2011, 04:40:28 UTC

Whew.....angry, hot and dirty. I need to sip some iced tea now. :)

slybrunette November 9 2011, 04:43:57 UTC

Hehe, gotta work all that anger out somehow, ahem.

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)