Comments | slybrunette: it sticks in the spokes of you {ncis

slybrunette

it sticks in the spokes of you {ncis - tony; tony/ziva}

Nov 26, 2010 19:27

Title: It Sticks In The Spokes Of You
Fandom: NCIS
Characters/Pairings: Tony; Tony/Ziva.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,570
Spoilers: Season 8, pretty loosely.
Summary: A man flies into town. Another walks into a bar. There's a familiar beat to all of this. He thinks he saw it in a movie, once.

( every now and then the trend bucks )

character: ncis: tony, character: ncis: ziva, fandom: ncis, !fic, ship: ncis: tony/ziva

Comments 26

shirleyann66 November 27 2010, 01:42:16 UTC

You just broke my heart. In a good way.

Gorgeous - gorgeous - gorgeous. And so sad, sad, sad. :(

Beautiful...

(see? I can't even get a real sentence out... O.o ).

slybrunette November 27 2010, 03:45:03 UTC

Aw, well I'm glad it was in a good way and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

jack_infinitude November 27 2010, 01:53:41 UTC

This was great. :)

slybrunette November 27 2010, 03:45:22 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought so!

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slybrunette November 27 2010, 03:45:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

olivia_j November 27 2010, 02:27:48 UTC

That's just beautiful. So much unspoken, so many layers. And so hopeful in such a gorgeously understated and subtle way. Loved it!

slybrunette November 27 2010, 03:46:25 UTC

As much as I like my angst, I hate ending things on too much of a sour/sad note. I'm glad this worked for you and that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

alidiabin November 27 2010, 04:41:55 UTC

Wow! Good fic. I'm kinda wordless it was so awesome. The present tense didn't feel weird which was very good. Wow!

slybrunette November 27 2010, 18:48:33 UTC

Thank you! I pretty much exclusively write in present tense, so I'm glad that didn't throw you off and that you enjoyed it!

alidiabin November 28 2010, 23:18:39 UTC

Some authors can pull off present tense so can't you can.