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slybrunette

prompting time

Dec 02, 2009 18:37

To celebrate my newfound freedom:

PROMPT ME:

fandom | pairing | song lyric

(Fandoms: Grey's Anatomy, The Big Bang Theory, Lost; also making exceptions for Dead Like Me, Oz, BSG)

Last time I got through the first half-dozen; this time it is my goal to surpass that.

And...go!

ETA: Prompting closed. Thanks for playing ( Read more... )

character: ga: cristina, ship: lost: jack/sawyer/claire, character: lost: jack, character: ga: mark, character: ga: izzie, character: ga: alex, fandom: lost, fandom: grey's anatomy, character: ga: lexie, ship: ga: alex/cristina, ship: ga: mark/lexie, character: lost: sawyer, prompt me, ship: ga: alex/izzie, character: lost: claire, !fic

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At work, shirking my duties... crickets December 3 2009, 00:52:43 UTC

lost + jack/sawyer/claire + "you wrote our names down on the sidewalk but the rain came and washed 'em off"

Re: At work, shirking my duties... slybrunette December 4 2009, 04:09:09 UTC

There was an old abandoned house, the shutters closed and cobwebbed and the grass too tall and a shade somewhere between healthy green and sunbaked brown, and this was somehow what they ended up calling home ( ... )

Re: At work, shirking my duties... gigglemonster December 4 2009, 04:15:16 UTC

Ooooooohh I LOVE THIS!
Gosh you're clever!
And this line

At night, the three of them fit together like puzzle pieces and Claire tried to shake off the feeling that she couldn’t quite see the big picture from down here.

Fabulous! Oh Claire.
Also, I love the imagery in this. I can totally picture the house and the hat and Sawyer's southern drawl! I love it :)

Re: At work, shirking my duties... slybrunette December 4 2009, 04:18:14 UTC

I'll take clever over so many other adjectives I've been practically shouting at myself while writing this. Thank you hun, because I seriously am way out of practice with Lost, and your feedback means a ton to me :) I'm glad you liked this!

There was very little fight left in Jack. crickets December 4 2009, 04:27:33 UTC

Holy crap. My love for this is overflowing. Like a fic!love waterfall! Seriously. I adore the addition of the second part and the manner in which you used the prompt and the detail of the paint at the end, AND are you serious? How could you have felt anything but positive about this?

This line? There was very little fight left in Jack. Just kind of breaks my heart a little. But the idea of him just being able to rest, to have the quiet and comfort you paint in both of these scenarios is so amazing.

You just get better and better and always surprise me with your stories and even your sentence structure. (No really there are so many times when I go "Oh I LOVE how she worded that.") WHY are you not writing in this fandom anymore? Cause you do it so well.

I keep wondering about the symbolism of that paint splatter. A merging of two worlds. Hmm.

You're my hero. You know that right?

Re: There was very little fight left in Jack. slybrunette December 4 2009, 04:32:12 UTC

The original plan here was to do the first part. Except I couldn't figure out an ending to it. And in came the second part. By the time it was done, I didn't know if it was genius or contrived or somewhere in between.

I did do the sparse thing you told me to a month or two ago. Or I tried. There's exposition that's gone from this, and I think maybe it's better that way you know? It kind of makes me want to write in the fandom again but at the same time I never have any ideas of my own. Maybe one of these days.

You're onto something with the paint splatter m'dear.

I'm so freaking glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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