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crickets February 1 2009, 23:00:08 UTC
This is fantastic. I especially love that last scene. So well-done. Man, I like Sadie a lot and I love the way you write her.

You've done everyone well here. I especially liked the scene with Chief. For all of your worrying it came out perfectly. Just perfect, really. And your Cristina voice is dead on... again.

The image of Mark asking to cut in on the dance floor is so sickeningly sweet, I love it.

Beautiful job!

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slybrunette February 2 2009, 03:22:40 UTC
I love Sadie, you know this, and she just is so easy to use POV-wise when it comes to group scenes.

That section with the Chief is draft 3/6. Yes, I rewrote it six times. How sad.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and for everything else!

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liljan98 February 1 2009, 23:20:21 UTC
This was incredibly awesome. Not just the fact that there is a wedding, but the way you just write the characters, ALL characters so true to character. I especially liked the Owen / Cristina part. Well and lots more. Wonderful story.

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slybrunette February 2 2009, 03:23:46 UTC
Aw thanks! Everyone keeps telling me that ensemble is my strong suit so I'm just...going with it at this point. I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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nursebadass February 1 2009, 23:32:32 UTC
I know that I don't have to tell you how fantastic you are. I never cared for Meredith or Derek but you made the wedding a likable event, even for me. Fantastic work. Your ensemble portrayal is always amazing. :)

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slybrunette February 2 2009, 03:28:47 UTC
I never liked them either; I make no bones about that. But what I do like is canon and going through that avenue makes this feel all the more plausible.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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singer201 February 2 2009, 00:26:07 UTC
Loved this!! Chief at the scrub sink, Mark and Lexie, Mark and Derek--it's all perfect.

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slybrunette February 2 2009, 03:30:32 UTC
Aw thank you! I had a lot of fun with those last two but writing Richard was one hell of a struggle -- never done that before.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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clockwork_jo February 2 2009, 00:32:25 UTC
I am so in love with this right now...

You just captured everyone so perfectly. I loved all the little nuances that you kept of the characters... Really great. I just loved it. Everything about it. >_<

*Gushes*

Something about the Owen/Cristina parts were so great, particularly. Just because I can really imagine their moments like that. Like, when she says the line about the suit, and the way he makes her laugh. Just little tiny but completely perfect moments.

Loved it!! (But you can probably tell...)

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slybrunette February 2 2009, 03:31:47 UTC
Aw thank you! You're two sweet :)

Owen/Cristina is not getting much easier to write for me, but I'm having a lot of fun with it when I do, so that's something.

I'm really glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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clockwork_jo February 2 2009, 15:44:42 UTC
Aww, no problem!! I always look forward to your fics ^_^

For someone who struggles, you write O/C so perfectly. >_<

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