Comments | slybrunette: it's a green christmas in this town (4/?) {ensemble}

slybrunette

it's a green christmas in this town (4/?) {ensemble}

Dec 30, 2008 17:32

Title: It's A Green Christmas In This Town (4/?)
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Ensemble. Meredith/Derek (light, again), Alex/Izzie, Mark/Lexie, Cristina/Owen (not in this part), Sadie. Other characters in other parts.
Word Count: 1,550
Author's Note: My need to keep you all interested outweighs my need to make this part longer. ( Read more... )

fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic

Comments 20

crickets December 30 2008, 22:51:58 UTC

The awkward conversation between Alex and George was perfect. You're great at writing tension. I could hear them saying all of that loud and clear.

Can't wait for the next part. No pressure! You can do this!

Yay for Izzie being a peacemaker of sorts.

slybrunette January 1 2009, 21:19:32 UTC

I like tension -- it's fun to write.

Izzie as something other than the crazy bitch is so much more achievable, I swear.

I'm glad you're enjoyhing this; thanks for reading and reviewing!

liljan98 December 30 2008, 22:53:32 UTC

Even though there isn't a real MerDer moment in this I loved it anyway. Alex is on to something and I can't wait to see how that will play out. And then there were Mark and Lexie of course, which I love anytime and anywhere. Doing the things they do :) And I really really really like your Izzie. So much better than the show...

slybrunette January 1 2009, 21:21:17 UTC

I swear, I will get MerDer in here. I know I've got a lot of shippers reading this, I just never remember to work it in.

I'm glad you're enjoying this; thanks for reading and reviewing!

ladybeth December 30 2008, 22:59:43 UTC

AH, Alex is figuring things out. I am expecting a confrentation. Meanwhile George is having a freak out about why Alex answered Izzie's phone. Because George does that.

slybrunette January 1 2009, 21:21:54 UTC

I like when George freaks out. And yes, there will be a confrontation.

Thanks for reading and reviewing hun!

leobrat December 31 2008, 01:22:13 UTC

I can't wait until this is all done and I can read it all over again in one sitting. I bet it will really run together like a 2-part episode. You're really doing such a great job of tying all the 'plotlines' together. My favorite part of this section (other than, of course, Mark flipping Lexie's bra open) is Izzie being back to her season 1, Suzie-homemaker all around cheerleader self.

Oh, and Alex finally figuring out what's up. Oh lord, do I love that man when he's tortured. Such a pretty crier.

slybrunette January 4 2009, 03:58:28 UTC

I wanted it to run together like that, so hopefully it does. And I loved Izzie in S1...what happened to that girl.

Alex is a pretty crier. But he won't be the one crying here. Things are about to get a whole lot worse with them in a very rapid time period.

I'm glad you're enjoying this; thanks for reading and reviewing!

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slybrunette December 31 2008, 03:34:42 UTC

I don't know what I'm doing with Izzie. She's confusing to write right now. As in the very. And it's been so long since I've written decent George, I don't know from him either lol.

I'm glad you're enjoying this; thanks for reading and reviewing!

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slybrunette December 31 2008, 05:17:34 UTC

Yes, progress. Perhaps we should send Shonda the definition.

George was almost stuck in the house. This is the remastered version of fic I tried to write in September...when I was a George/Lexie shipper (among other things). Be thankful for small favors dear.