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[slybrunette]

Title: I Like To Keep My Shell Intact
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Charlotte/Sawyer
Word Count: 1,603
Rating: R
Prompt: This is the real reply to superduperkc's day as queen (aka the one I wrote specifically for her). Also for #18 - I Pity You at un_love_you.
Spoilers: Up to "There's No Place Like Home Part 2".
Summary: "You don't actually have a

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[crickets]

Briefly, there’s the thought of going out into the jungle to find Claire, to try again (he still sees her, in dreams, he still hates himself for giving up his search), just tell Juliet she’s in charge and leave. Except he probably wouldn’t come back.

I made an audible sound at this point, one that sounded very much like "awww." I love you for including this little tidbit. (Okay I love you for many reasons, but this is one of them.)

I love the confrontation it's so remarkably Charlotte.

(he understands that - he saw her with the guy she came with, the jumpy little physicist, the one who never came back - he’s not an idiot)

I liked this little mention of Daniel but it does make me sad that he didn't make it back in this universe. Especially what it means for his fate out on that ocean. Scary!

I especially love how you compare the two of them. It really makes even more sense than I thought it did before reading this fic. Which was a kind of a lot.

Thank you for writing this. You've definitely gone above and beyond. I really do wish I could be your permanent queen! Hehe.

[slybrunette]

Like I would leave out Sawyer/Claire in fic for you, pshaw. Plus it helps you ignore the fact that Juliet is mentioned ;)

I'm glad it's remarkably Charlotte, because I've never written her before, at least not speaking. As for Daniel...well I have fic about him that fits this universe. And it isn't pretty.

To me, comparing them just makes sense. They are a lot alike to me, but I guess it's good that it made even more sense.

I'm really thrilled you liked this hun! I wanted to do something special, so hopefully I achieved that goal.