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Oct 31, 2007 14:27



It doesn’t occur to her that saying she needs to talk to him means that she should actually have something planned to say until she’s closing the bedroom door behind them. She knows what she wants to say, she just doesn’t know how to say it.

“We don’t need to do this,” he tells her, sensing the tension, noticing that, although she’s temporarily ( Read more... )

fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic

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remainvanishing October 31 2007, 19:15:15 UTC
That was beautiful. Thank you! I love the Mer/Alex scene. was perfect. And your Meredith is as always amazing.

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slybrunette October 31 2007, 19:17:31 UTC
Aw, thanks! And your prompt is coming soon. This one was for ladybeth. A lot of people requested A/I fic lol.

I'm glad you liked the M/A parts since those were the ones that came the easiest to me.

Thanks for reading!

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remainvanishing October 31 2007, 19:20:23 UTC
There's gonna be more? Yay! That's way better than candies!

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slybrunette October 31 2007, 19:22:05 UTC
Hell yeah there's going to be more!

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sparklepop777 October 31 2007, 19:34:37 UTC
No, sorry, you do not get to stop there.

:P Really, I love it. You write them well. And like I've sad before, there's not much Azzie fic out there. Makes me happy that you're my friend. :D:D:D

And woohoo for Halloween fic! Happy Halloween, girl!

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slybrunette October 31 2007, 19:44:17 UTC
Unfortunately, yes, I so very much do ;)

I'm glad you liked it though! And I've got two more A/I fics for my Fic or Treat thing that's going on below this post in progress.

Happy Halloween to you too! Thanks for reading!

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ladybeth October 31 2007, 19:54:30 UTC
Ah, Greys. The only show that allows to have them fighting each other one scene, and a few later, implied more.

Very good! And there was more Alex/Izzie then I thought there was going to be, given what you've told me while you writing it.

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slybrunette October 31 2007, 19:59:26 UTC
Yeah, don't you just love that?

And I tried desperately to put A/I in there towards the end because I knew I was going to end up touting it as an A/I fic so might as well live up to it.

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and listening to me bitch about it!

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ladybeth October 31 2007, 20:07:39 UTC
A/I is always a good thing:) Plus out of the couples, They (and Der/Mer) are probably the ones to have repeat offenses.

No problem! Besides, you listen to my whining about stories and beta them when they aren't even a fandom you actually partispate in. So I owe it to you in any case:)

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nvrpromise October 31 2007, 20:06:32 UTC
Loved it! You've captured all of the characters perfectly in my opinion and you need to keep going with this. :D

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slybrunette October 31 2007, 20:20:01 UTC
Thank you! I would continue but really it was hard enough finishing this that I'm not sure that I could. I'm glad you liked it!

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stellicidio October 31 2007, 22:29:50 UTC
This was great!! You write them very well, really in-character. I had to get used to the present tense as I'm used to past tense (too much rpg LOL) but I loved it :) It's also something I could really see happening on the show.

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slybrunette November 1 2007, 01:28:14 UTC
Thank you! I tend to switch between past and present tense when I write, it's just whatever feels right with the fic. And I'm glad you thought it fit with the show -- that's always my main concern.

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